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Trizzy Tre
Superior Member Joined: 28 March 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5101 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 30-7-1 Form: WLWLWW |
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Posted: 18 May 2017 at 3:50am |
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You fucking attention whore.... Yo... Chess plays to checkmates not a scratch ..I'm doing fine... Provoked? I'll 'cut everyone' dont give a fuck who's in line!! Doom u can die! My writtens vs yours? he'll lose in that equation.. ..off the top I'll put hands-up-quicker than a thankful Asian! 🙏 The facts amazin how u begged for my attention like a newcomer... Wannabe noticed like teenage bitches growin tits over the summer!! U a Chicago gunner? ..some gangbanger? Yea I got it guy... It's fitting how all your punches always seem to come up "Chi"!!! Claims of guns a lie! a street 'Savage'? You'll loosely run your mouth... Tre in ur face u'll start 'mumbling' when the 21 n Lil Uzi coming out!! You don't have bars like that!!!! Drop me? Under what condition? Ur next Chicago plane departure...Tre's always in an upright position! Who the fuck you kiddin? You lack punches, just have cadence... But I still smell stank pussy behind that vocal perfume fragrance!! Responding months later is tasteless, look up old verses? u needy hoe... Watch Doom die 'reaching from every line'...thats the Jordan pose! Still more to go! Try to expose what's been used he'll revamp up? You bring back more old stories from the Attic then Ann Frank stuck!! Ur a punk who's King of the Lions? No Pride, ur crew wasnt vicious... That's why they Pulled the 'Plug'....................no narcotics shipments!! Doom is gimmicks, a street Hustler by night, like he's hard as shit... 9am McDonald's u start ur shift wearing ur "ghetto rapper" starter kit! U just a bitch! Months to respond n sadly its sub-par spit dude.. 'When-D' said "Where's the beef?" ....didn't know he meant dollar menu!! Audio head scared to diss another audio head? Yet u flex D...?? Congratulations you're the first audio champ losing a beef to a textee!! EMPIRE. |
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Trizzy Tre
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Ok, I'll apologize for this...
I'm sorry. Seemed to hurt to many. |
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SELF ACTIVATE
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Not gonna lie, shit was kinda heavy, Triz. You had some dope ass bars. 🔥
This beef is starting to get really interesting. I'm enjoying the hell out of it. Y'all should keep it going. |
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Neek
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I stopped reading after thankful asian... so imma need some quotes please and thank you. |
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SELF ACTIVATE
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Lol it gets better after that line
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Trizzy Tre
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Keep it hate free. Bias or not...don't lose credibility that way... If you wanna piss on something, keep it in dooms mouth as usual. Stick with creating fictitious mountain ranges to place your faces LOL Bars. Ouch. |
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Neek
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listen, im not here to fuck your thread up. I have no horse in this race.
all the shit you just said does not apply to me. I just wanted to know if it was really dope or not. why is you mad? |
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#Bananas
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Trizzy Tre
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Zero hate. |
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Rude
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you had some nice bars in here Trizz like the Chi line and the mumble one, and my favorite was the "Reaching from every Line that's the Jordan pose" line.
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Well for the neutral this was ripe,(went in there a little heavy eh Trizzy),and the fact
you also answered back in a quick fashion makes it a little bit more special really, your similes were working well which in turn just made the punches that bit heavier on landing,i think you made your intention quite clear also,you seemed amped and aggressive,which is a trait i like to read in beefs and battles,the thankful Asian line and the chi line were solid examples of the heat you typed here,good work,good work indeed..peace. |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance". |
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Trizzy Tre
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Didn't see you post.. Thanks for the feed, glad you were feeling it Sammy. Much appreciated. Also thanks to Crim and Rude. |
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SELF ACTIVATE
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Bruh...
I can't tell if you're serious or joking, but this isn't the first time you've called me Sammy in a post. So for the sake of clarity my dude my name is actually SELF ACTIVATE. I believe we know each other. lol |
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Lord Puente
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These damn doubles
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Trizzy Tre
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Sammy... I have no idea what you're talking about. None. And yes, we do know each other. |
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Word. Glad we got that cleared up.
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iLL ScriptureZ
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I fuck with this. One thing I like about your style is your ability to word your punches extremely well. You can tell that is one of your consistent strong points in all of your writing. Further with that, that Chi, Asian, Lil Uzi lines were the highlights... way to catch a body...
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Trizzy Tre
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Thanks bro. Appreciate the feed and looks... |
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