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    Posted: 19 May 2017 at 12:35am
today I decided, let me put the pen down
wrote some dope shit, it was friend bound
proud, like I won a championship in the 10th round
then I was like nahhhhh, fuck puttin this shit out

I ain't gonna push it, aint gonna waste
harddrive space to even make an adjustment

read that line with Conor McGregor inflection

dumbing down is becoming how I structure now
let.me.spell.it.out.for.you.
the periods are breaks, compounds are function-ale
new and improved illustrious style!!!! (yay!!!!)

im tryna be idiot-proof, but these idiots prove
being odd man. in a room full of idiots…
the idiots you…
im uncertain that serendipity's true.
ModSquad.. gargantuan roots,
harvested this organically. mastery's truth.
my whole menagerie boom.


I just wanted to write, help the growth too
but the focal, is hand holding and "quote clues"
theres simplicity in simply seeming simple.
victory's vindication, isn't written with a stencil

I don't want to be carbon.. but they don't copy
Plato philosphy, lost on this potatoe colony
so instead of using some rainbow ideology
rather bow out graceful, the new deuteronomy
second bar.. says im too smart. for retards…
(in this stanza only)
think! before you are applauding me
im 99.999% sure. youre what the problem, B.
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Did I list you as one of my top five topical heads???

If not, I should have. I'm about to hit the streets, but I'll be back after while to give this a proper response.
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