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Six is also a lucky number!
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iLL ScriptureZ
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KI That Vet assigned to bust, your times resigned to clutch Find the much fired of us line up, mind the midas touch You have become quite the wordsmith bro. Wordplacement is razor sharp right here. Sign that fucks were given, shook a kid, took the rhythm Hook the bitten, shut the lid, sit and look at riddum Fucking wid 'em? Cos this free might see ISIS through Light this doob? Now i'm high free, fight this newb Ha ha!! I can picture you movin your hands in cadence with this nasty segment right here. Why cuz I'm spitting it over and I can't help but to be like bing...bing....Bing! Nice Right it's true, Keeks has highly spiked its doom Lighter tunes? If I was you, I'd have ID Crisis 2 Why's this news? It's passion, hence I ask where ya' passion went? So just imagine tense where Keeks hasn't sensed- Tension, with you all sat on the fence, passin 'friends' In callout, threads need uppin' like I have ass fashion sense *PAUSE* Think this is all I can? Man, I STILL hoard parts Have 'em callin' DAMN like it's the Billboard Charts Ill thoughts dart with will that could fill four carts Your Gilmour smarts can swing, but my skill swords hearts DTK You can polish a verse but i'm bombing you nerds with competent words Plotting a curse on pompous conserved, ominous sirs i'm a monster with verbs STOP!!.....Out the gate this was clean as hell ha! No justice league, Im busting seams on anyone that fucks with me They run and scream as I kill young emcees that I punch and knee on any rugged beat No mumble rap I'm fucking done with that...I arrive like a thunder clap You can stay dumping gats, i'll punch and slap your tounge and back until your mother fucking lungs collapse yessiiirr! I'm a sewage pipe, the putrid type I come through at night like a human plight a prototype of woodys neighbour Sid if he decied to go ham,spit raps and produce em right I strong arm lames and plotting to bomb strays in a hot spot in pompei... And my aim is long range so you know aint got the answers like Kayne talking to the don sway! You're overated, i'm underplayed... theres no debate that... my lungs are made Of cobra venom so I love to slay... any damn rapper that spits something lame Preforming precision incisions on any spitter im hitting with reckless conditions Step to my writtens you'll get left with some missing, next to kin and mess in the kitchen I bench press a millions different setences, and when my pen flexes it's penmanship I'm like the Kendrick of the internet leaving a big mess of evidence whenever you step to this Man!! I was just reminded why DTK is such a killer. Rhymes back to back to back. Talkin that shit! "Youre overrated, I'm Underplayed" Lmao.....dope!. This was a crispy collab yall. Sorry it took me so long to finish the feed. |
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The pen and pad that's my kitchen ware Michelin starred from the start of this fiscal year (Damn) Ha! I swear the only reason I understood this whole bar was from watching kitchen Nightmares. This was dope It's the bar brigadier brought it since Britney Spears.. Charted, I charred it, i'm charged up like 'bitch come here!' (Yeah) lol...diggin the add ons at the end of every bar Rap sheet reads like a burgeoning film career Visuals, visuals never been middle tier (No) Lyrical miracle that is not CHAIN CHAIN and the wordplay are Arthur and Guinevere (Bro) This verse would sound chunky in audio Artist or engineer, maybe he's both Foes know he blew up like Marjory Simpsons hair (Whoa) God, they are softer than cartilage and pinky swears (Gross) lmao @ pinky swear The throne they are watching to me is a swivel chair (Ho) The flow brings the pain of orphan and widow tears (Cold) Cry me a river, i'm waiting in my fishing gear (Yo) Can you not see that i'm Pac and a grizzly bear.. Mixed Can you not see that i'm OM's most popular trillionaire, bitch I see what you did here. Gotta admit I like the fact you are dabbling in fresh ways to convey your raw talent for ruggedness. NIGMA Come with them putaso’s.. Every cross thrown leave you babies with a snot nose I’m beyond dope, smoke a genie in a bong toke<----- Ha!! Dope! Punches y’all are chucking aren’t touching us.. Y’all fornicate with testicles? Ya fucking nuts ^^ This whole segment was butter smooth Not tough enough to beat us, each divine redeemers Fly with speeds and twice the heat of the brightest meteor That second line was tight^^ Combined the typa demons you should keep undercover To make the people yell “OHHHHH” like they speaking in colours Tryna reach my level? Left you with your fellow slaves I train tethered to the ocean’s floor and echo waves Get no pain laying in desert terrain till I’m set ablaze Since I meditate in trees so dense they deflect the rays Perspectives change in shade, it’s an introspective state<-----Nasty! This segment was sharp my dude^ I Father devils like Deckard Cain, a decrepit angel, so pucker up These uppercuts cause sweat to spray when they wreck your face Send you to the depths of space to lay in your resting place Ha! Ha! Yup!! Again the connections was on point...flow raw. It’s respect by nature Yesssirrr!! Nice drop bro! ILL SCRIPTUREZ Rappin' to the dead cuz I mummify verses Summertime grind is how I summarize workin' On my mother I'll remove ya fuckin' eyes, certain Claimin' American but a Russian spy lurkin' ^^^ LOL!!!! Priceless!! I don't put the gun aside, Cal-cutta guys turban Haven't had a day that didn't justify bourbon <-----That was just sick how it came off Concentrated genocide you can trust that I'm German Only snaps on my beat is the crunch of my vermin iLL with a blade is a butterfly surgeon Great skill with the word placement^^ Open up ya chest like pumpkin pie dessert 'n Come alive in churches & uncover my purpose Summoned by the pure words uttered by a virgin<---lmao!! Love this line! Pluperfect pictures no Shutterfly to discover I'm perfect Gutter rhymes will have ya Hummer ride swervin' Like you're drunk then drive to other side You fuckin' die ya lover cries cuz every punch of mine's hurtin' EXO As the clock ticks with promises I know I can stick with dominance Way to come out the gate chunkin'em! I'm the prominent Romulus your time is up But the problem is my mind is fucked Robbing kids for lines and such I'm talking white girl, cus your rhymes just suck Tom Brady bitches who's vaginas are tucked The Raider in this collab & it's fine with us I see you got on another level with the short bar skill.I gotta show love for the effortless way you show up. Indeed a Monster Bless the sky with Duzt- More skill than Lebrons hands So i'm heaven sent further than water beyond land <---Haaa ! Nice! Smarter than a bong pass, no I haven't gone mad Just flowing with each of my comrades No congrats to dumb rats, in the wrong taps Chasing the wrong cheese over some dumb crap I'm just wondering where the gun at Cus I got more dirt on me than a mud flap Very slick bro. The way you wrote it out forces the mind to pick up the pace which adds the extra entertainment value. Gotta Feed the rest later when I get off work KI That Vet assigned to bust, your times resigned to clutch Find the much fired of us line up, mind the midas touch Sign that fucks were given, shook a kid, took the rhythm Hook the bitten, shut the lid, sit and look at riddum Fucking wid 'em? Cos this free might see ISIS through Light this doob? Now i'm high free, fight this newb Right it's true, Keeks has highly spiked its doom Lighter tunes? If I was you, I'd have ID Crisis 2 Why's this news? It's passion, hence I ask where ya' passion went? So just imagine tense where Keeks hasn't sensed- Tension, with you all sat on the fence, passin 'friends' In callout, threads need uppin' like I have ass fashion sense *PAUSE* Think this is all I can? Man, I STILL hoard parts Have 'em callin' DAMN like it's the Billboard Charts Ill thoughts dart with will that could fill four carts Your Gilmour smarts can swing, but my skill swords hearts DTK You can polish a verse but i'm bombing you nerds with competent words Plotting a curse on pompous conserved, ominous sirs i'm a monster with verbs No justice league, Im busting seams on anyone that fucks with me They run and scream as I kill young emcees that I punch and knee on any rugged beat No mumble rap I'm fucking done with that...I arrive like a thunder clap You can stay dumping gats, i'll punch and slap your tounge and back until your mother fucking lungs collapse I'm a sewage pipe, the putrid type I come through at night like a human plight a prototype of woodys neighbour Sid if he decied to go ham,spit raps and produce em right I strong arm lames and plotting to bomb strays in a hot spot in pompei... And my aim is long range so you know aint got the answers like Kayne talking to the don sway! You're overated, i'm underplayed... theres no debate that... my lungs are made Of cobra venom so I love to slay... any damn rapper that spits something lame Preforming precision incisions on any spitter im hitting with reckless conditions Step to my writtens you'll get left with some missing, next to kin and mess in the kitchen I bench press a millions different setences, and when my pen flexes it's penmanship I'm like the Kendrick of the internet leaving a big mess of evidence whenever you step to this |
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Guy! Thanks man..
Nigma, I agree!
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Nigma
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Yell OHHH/Yellow
Thanks for the breakdown bro, it's a long ass collab, don't expect much feed tbh. I'm sure people are reading it and that's all that matters.
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The_Guy
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Nobody feeding this??? Let me kick it off.
Chain Its your usual swagger here. I like the use of multi in this because its a shorter verse, helped it flow smoothly. This was my favorite part of your verse. it was strung together so effortlessly. CHAIN and the wordplay are Arthur and Guinevere (Bro) Artist or engineer, maybe he's both Foes know he blew up like Marjory Simpsons hair (Whoa) God, they are softer than cartilage and pinky swears (Gross) The throne they are watching to me is a swivel chair Nigma What I like most is your use of vocabulary in this. One line in particular(speaking in colours) might have went over my head a bit so that was my only fall out with your verse. My favorite section was: I’m beyond dope, smoke a genie in a bong toke Punches y’all are chucking aren’t touching us.. Y’all fornicate with testicles? Ya fucking nuts ILL Buddy...your verse was flames. The wordplay and the smoothness of the flow here is immaculate. And the rhyme scheme you chose to go with was dope. I would quote your entire verse honestly but i was most fond of Haven't had a day that didn't justify bourbon Concentrated genocide you can trust that I'm German Only snaps on my beat is the crunch of my vermin iLL with a blade is a butterfly surgeon Exo to me your verse was the one with its chest poked out. You flowed as if you are the old head in the game and letting these young thunder cats know you can still flow with the best of them. There was nothing hard hitting but then again, it didnt have to be. My favorite bar was Tom Brady bitches who's vaginas tucked The Raider in this collab & it's fine with us Bless the sky with Duzt- Ki I like the aggression in your verse. its almost like you still have something to prove but you're definitely one of the more established vets, at the same time its a good trait to still have. Your stand out for me was Right it's true, Keeks has highly spiked its doom Lighter tunes? If I was you, I'd have ID Crisis 2 D2K You came with the longer bars with tons packed into it. I like the aggression in this as well. My only downfall is actually the length of the lines. I think the shorter bars from every one else threw me off once i got to yours. But your verse was dope to close out everyone else's as well. You were the 6 god for this Step to my writtens you'll get left with some missing next to kin and mess in the kitchen I bench press millions of different sentences and when my pen flexes it's penmanship Nice collab fellas Edited by The_Guy - 24 May 2017 at 5:04pm |
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Kiki Spirez
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“Six is a number perfect in itself, not because God created all things in six days; rather, the convert is true God created all things in six days because the number is perfect.” Saint Augustine (The City of God) CHAIN The pen and pad that's my kitchen ware Michelin starred from the start of this fiscal year (Damn) It's the bar brigadier brought it since Britney Spears.. Charted, I charred it, i'm charged up like 'bitch come here!' (Yeah) Rap sheet reads like a burgeoning film career Visuals, visuals never been middle tier (No) Lyrical miracle that is not CHAIN CHAIN and the wordplay are Arthur and Guinevere (Bro) Artist or engineer, maybe he's both Foes know he blew up like Marjory Simpsons hair (Whoa) God, they are softer than cartilage and pinky swears (Gross) The throne they are watching to me is a swivel chair (Ho) The flow brings the pain of orphan and widow tears (Cold) Cry me a river, i'm waiting in my fishing gear (Yo) Can you not see that i'm Pac and a grizzly bear.. Mixed Can you not see that i'm OM's most popular trillionaire, bitch NIGMA Come with them putaso’s.. Every cross thrown leave you babies with a snot nose I’m beyond dope, smoke a genie in a bong toke Punches y’all are chucking aren’t touching us.. Y’all fornicate with testicles? Ya fucking nuts Not tough enough to beat us, each divine redeemers Fly with speeds and twice the heat of the brightest meteor Combined the typa demons you should keep undercover To make the people yell “OHHHHH” like they speaking in colours Tryna reach my level? Left you with your fellow slaves I train tethered to the ocean’s floor and echo waves Get no pain laying in desert terrain till I’m set ablaze Since I meditate in trees so dense they deflect the rays Perspectives change in shade, it’s an introspective state I Father devils like Deckard Cain, a decrepit angel, so pucker up These uppercuts cause sweat to spray when they wreck your face Send you to the depths of space to lay in your resting place It’s respect by nature ILL SCRIPTUREZ Rappin' to the dead cuz I mummify verses Summertime grind is how I summarize workin' On my mother I'll remove ya fuckin' eyes, certain Claimin' American but a Russian spy lurkin' I don't put the gun aside, Cal-cutta guys turban Haven't had a day that didn't justify bourbon Concentrated genocide you can trust that I'm German Only snaps on my beat is the crunch of my vermin iLL with a blade is a butterfly surgeon Open up ya chest like pumpkin pie dessert 'n Come alive in churches & uncover my purpose Summoned by the pure words uttered by a virgin Pluperfect pictures no Shutterfly to discover I'm perfect Gutter rhymes will have ya Hummer ride swervin' Like you're drunk then drive to other side You fuckin' die ya lover cries cuz every punch of mine's hurtin' EXO As the clock ticks with promises I know I can stick with dominance I'm the prominent Romulus your time is up But the problem is my mind is fucked Robbing kids for lines and such I'm talking white girl, cus your rhymes just suck Tom Brady bitches who's vaginas are tucked The Raider in this collab & it's fine with us Bless the sky with Duzt- More skill than Lebrons hands So i'm heaven sent further than water beyond land Smarter than a bong pass, no I haven't gone mad Just flowing with each of my comrades No congrats to dumb rats, in the wrong taps Chasing the wrong cheese over some dumb crap I'm just wondering where the gun at Cus I got more dirt on me than a mud flap KI That Vet assigned to bust, your times resigned to clutch Find the much fired of us line up, mind the midas touch Sign that fucks were given, shook a kid, took the rhythm Hook the bitten, shut the lid, sit and look at riddum Fucking wid 'em? Cos this free might see ISIS through Light this doob? Now i'm high free, fight this newb Right it's true, Keeks has highly spiked its doom Lighter tunes? If I was you, I'd have ID Crisis 2 Why's this news? It's passion, hence I ask where ya' passion went? So just imagine tense where Keeks hasn't sensed- Tension, with you all sat on the fence, passin 'friends' In callout, threads need uppin' like I have ass fashion sense *PAUSE* Think this is all I can? Man, I STILL hoard parts Have 'em callin' DAMN like it's the Billboard Charts Ill thoughts dart with will that could fill four carts Your Gilmour smarts can swing, but my skill swords hearts DTK
You can polish a verse but i'm bombing you nerds with competent words Plotting a curse on pompous conserved, ominous sirs i'm a monster with verbs No justice league, Im busting seams on anyone that fucks with me They run and scream as I kill young emcees that I punch and knee on any rugged beat No mumble rap I'm fucking done with that...I arrive like a thunder clap You can stay dumping gats, i'll punch and slap your tounge and back until your mother fucking lungs collapse I'm a sewage pipe, the putrid type I come through at night like a human plight a prototype of woodys neighbour Sid if he decied to go ham,spit raps and produce em right I strong arm lames and plotting to bomb strays in a hot spot in pompei... And my aim is long range so you know aint got the answers like Kayne talking to the don sway! You're overated, i'm underplayed... theres no debate that... my lungs are made Of cobra venom so I love to slay... any damn rapper that spits something lame Preforming precision incisions on any spitter im hitting with reckless conditions Step to my writtens you'll get left with some missing, next to kin and mess in the kitchen I bench press a millions different setences, and when my pen flexes it's penmanship I'm like the Kendrick of the internet leaving a big mess of evidence whenever you step to this Edited by Cuba - 21 May 2017 at 4:00pm |
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