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Cheeseburger Eddie View Drop Down
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    Posted: 25 May 2017 at 4:23am
Avoid the First Guy beat by Smoovee
https://soundcloud.com/cheeseburger-eddie/avoid-the-first-guy
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I'm not a big fan of the singing (partly because it was influenced by the beat synth, which I didn't like at all), but the rapping is solid and the flow is tight. I wish it had a bit more energy vocally, but I think that may be another consequence of the lethargic beat.
Insert something rappy here
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you come out of the woodworks when you see the mt rushmore poll. you saw ppl saying "if he was active" now you droppin tracks by the day.
 
this one, flow was way better. less animation in voice, but for this track was nice, as I say this you  started showing more voice animation which was tight.
 
this is best track ive heard from you.
 
first hiccup for me was the payback to payback was slightly off by a hair. other than that, honestly no complaints. very nice flow. and this was a beat I never would have used.
 
I didn't care for that little bit of a hook/bridge/singy part at the end. other than that solid drop.
 
id like to hear more at this caliber. based on differences im assuming you've had some of these pre recorded. as in you ddidnt just make it for the drop? just diff sounds you normally hear as an artist grows and changes.
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Nah, man nothing pre done, written or recorded my workflow is from start to finish to release and move on. Made most of these pretty quick as I'm "getting back into shape". I did see "if he was active" and shook my head that I let it become a question. I might not be into battles, but that doesn't mean I'm not competitive. I just try to switch it up, see what works and what doesn't. When I was doing the Rap Up it was the only way to stay sane by the fourth month.

Really appreciate all the feed on this and the other ones. I don't want to be constantly bumping my own threads since I put out a lot of tracks but it really is helpful and appreciated. Especially letting me know what doesn't work for you. Much love everyone.
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