Audio Mic: Frank White & SjayDogg Demos |
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Scotty32
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Posted: 12 November 2004 at 7:34am |
posted on behalf of Frank and SJay...
feed back please |
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frank white
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props to orion and raptor on the beats
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the punching machine
bad boy 4 life biggie smalls was the illest |
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Abstrakt
Standard Member Joined: 23 March 2004 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 1702 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 32-17-2 Form: LLNNWW |
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Personally 'Gone Girl' is the best..Id get a girl on the chorus though (lol) If you cant find one, PM me cuz I guess I could find one. Peace
*EDIT* WTF, Is that a girl or Sjaydogg with LOTS of reverb????? *EDIT*
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Noxious
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^ its a gurl wit loadsa Reverb And i personaly like the Old Skool One the best... you both getting better... Gone is nice too.... you made that better... Crazy is tight... wit all Franks Punchlines... Props... |
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frank white
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cheers man
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the punching machine
bad boy 4 life biggie smalls was the illest |
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frank white
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some more feeback la please
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the punching machine
bad boy 4 life biggie smalls was the illest |
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King Jehu
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Sjay's flow is better than before. In the third verse, he killed it
with the multis and flow. Frank's flow is still horrible and the
quotables can't save his verses. Such a big fan of BIG, but only
emulates one of his two favorite characteristics. Oh well.
The third track....... Beat was cool. I've heard that bass and that kick... and the snare... hm... The hook was so bad, I had to close the window when I saw that the second hook was coming. or.. The hook was so bad, I wanted to hang my neck from one and die an agonizing death than to hear it again. Edited by King Jehu |
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Insert something rappy here
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-Orion-
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OK... Gone Girl... Sjay's better here simply 'cuz Frank's more of a punchline guy... that "look at that pair" line is shitty tho, the chorus is OK, but that "togEEEther!"... the E note is off. Old Skool Beats... Hook is shitty... Frank got the better flow on this one tho, both OK and had some OK lines. Crazy... Frank rips it with all his punchlines, Sjay's flow is a bit off on this... Overall... Frank should put more emotion in like Sjay does, 'cuz Frank actually has the better punchlines but it doesn't always show 'cuz of the delivery... Sjay should be a little less enthusiastic, lmfao, like on parts of Crazy I was just like calm down, haha, it doesn't always work in your favour, try and get a bit more lyrical as well, as all you ever seem to be doin' is some sort of narrative, and you ain't in The Streets, lmao. Frank's flow has gotten better... I think Jehpoo is jus' bein' hard on you for that... but it's still not as good as Sjay's... and Sjay's still isn't on-point either... Both improved... work well together... both on pretty much the same level... contrasting styles... can make for potentially good tunes... just a matter of takin' in feedback like this and learnin' from it. 1 |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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King Jehu
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PUNCHLINES IN A FUCKING LOVE SONG?
Oh man, I give up doin this rap shit. I think I'll reretire... |
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Insert something rappy here
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frank white
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nah king hese saying thats why i dint do it as well as sjay because im better at punchlines than emotions
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the punching machine
bad boy 4 life biggie smalls was the illest |
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-Orion-
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^ Yes
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Demonic
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ok gone girl im not to much of a fan of just my opinion ask clipz ive never like stuff in that sort of style Old beats very nice funny aswel with the vocies lol both spits were very good sjay i thought was a little better but wre both nice enjoyed this peice. Crazy was also good were a bit to loud at the start but it was good Frank i thought was better in this sjay went over the top lol nice drop overall good drop by both hope sjay comes back and starts to battle audio |
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SJay
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thanks for the props and thanks to SCOTTY im back on the site coz my internet was fuked cheers scotty
But thanks for the feedback and if you diss the beats, your dissing orion and raptor lol Orion n Raptor props to them for beats peace |
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RIP The Best Lyrically Fact!!!
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20theTruth
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^^^ eh frank ima look at em later tonight...
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no more
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Stalin
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i was pretty impressed by these.. I usually cant get into UK rap, i
just dont feel accents too much, but this was different, Gone Girl was
a decent song, like they said just need more emotion on franks part
Crazy was a pretty good song, next time u record like that though I suggest, Sjay smoke a blunt and Frank do a couple lines so SJ be more calm and Frank get a lil more agressive, the punches were good though Old SChool is pretty dope, I liek the flow on that track, heard some multis up in there and U know I love the multis, nice Jadakiss line..keep it up I didnt hear no huge problems that cant be fixed wit a lil practice, props for doin audio, keep at it, ull elevate quick |
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+Sick-Witted+
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G-Pfeif
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that old school beats one was the best.. the flow was ot.. but... that damn high pitched chorus was fuggin annoying... but i was feelin the flow and lyrics were decent.
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"I'll put a Loss to ya name like a Mexican City" "Ill Put an L to ya EGO like them building blocks" |
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Shadow
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LMFAO if these Demo's get your signed Got help us all |
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X-Fade II
ReKord..5-2-3 Bone Yard Torpex (ko) Scorpia_King (kox2) Aclipz Tu KhinDz |
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Demonic
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why all of a sudden do u bring beef with every onethere is nothing wrong with these tracks.
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SJay
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safe, Demonic you stuck up for us - me n frank bring love
And as for shadow expect a diss coming your way Ladies and gentleman of lyrical assault the release date for this diss is going to be: December 1st 2004 Title : (No name as yet) Shadow prepared to be ripped and anybody who wants a verse on it, please send it to me on msn iluvmoss@hotmail.com Peace |
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RIP The Best Lyrically Fact!!!
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Noxious
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*Coughs*.... im here...
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