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spume corrupt
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Posted: 12 July 2017 at 9:23pm |
Two tries taking this spot off the king!? Bullshit but I seen it trending
See LA with no tear ups, you got to fake shit and force it And I ain't need to mention ..... "Its all about the whole lot of what NOT you bring, that needs defending" When the Law of LA says it ain't working Corrupt, that means pretending No plans to square up, you bums need a quick relief to ease the tension Only thing I can say now, is fuck a cube off the sleeve intervention That's wanking! Stepping in to stir the broth Still ain't nobody's ranking, so even he can't discern the top From the salt shit Who's in contention? I reckon that's working vegetables and worthless stock! Check it! The scum already rose to the surface first Came to a perfect stop..... Just like the battlefields you herbs are from Me I only script words to bombs, watching some near begging for shots Cuba dude went pitching for J Hom, while most don't remember his drops Truth, whoever you choose Gone be a Homicide that ain't contending a lot You fucking heavenly flops I've transcended the top and hardly ever been propped Yall get together an plot, popularity over punches Ain't that some damn charity for ya lunches Caught slacking, short stacking all the challengers looking stunted Comes to the crunch it's embarrassing you nothing munchkins Edited by spume corrupt - 12 July 2017 at 9:44pm |
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Cuba
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You're the only guy who can complain about having to defend his title and make it seem like a brag. If you come out the back of this then nobody can dispute you're the top dog, right?
But hey, you might not even have that problem...I'd maybe focus on that first. Welcome to Bloodlines.
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daydizzle89
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Spume comes out before BL with a hammer. i like this. Flow was there, punches were there and the tempo is set. Spume aint playing around
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spume corrupt
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Ric flair shit my man
I gonna show anybody that thinks I'm second guessing myself that they totally don't know best Don't see this as complaining please just feed the facts I'm the man making the truth possible If it's flaming its flaming in rhyme form There's goes the man Come back with real feed chief |
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spume corrupt
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Preciate them looks though guys
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Crimson Juice
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Well had something to say here eh friend,i think your point was made..lol,
Two tries taking this spot off the king!? Bullshit but I seen it trending See LA with no tear ups, you got to fake shit and force it And I ain't need to mention ..... "Its all about the whole lot of what NOT you bring, that needs defending" When the Law of LA says it ain't working Corrupt, that means pretending No plans to square up, you bums need a quick relief to ease the tension Only thing I can say now, is fuck a cube off the sleeve intervention That's wanking! Stepping in to stir the broth Still ain't nobody's ranking, so even he can't discern the top From the salt shit Who's in contention? (wow put that statement on blast,this was a ripe read to be honest,it had an energy to it via subtle burst of emotions,coupled with the fact your contents were relevant just lifted this verse up and out at a reader,and with the wit entow just seemed to give this piece not just a statement vibe,but also an address of issues from your prospective,which i liked,(and that line about the sleeve intervention was clever & funny,i just wish you left out the kind of expo though by including wanking,as i got what you was conveying before I read that part,but with that typed I understand why you included it to help some ppl see the play),nice segment here i'm liking this..) I reckon that's working vegetables and worthless stock! Check it! The scum already rose to the surface first Came to a perfect stop..... Just like the battlefields you herbs are from Me I only script words to bombs, watching some near begging for shots Cuba dude went pitching for J Hom, while most don't remember his drops Truth, whoever you choose Gone be a Homicide that ain't contending a lot You fucking heavenly flops I've transcended the top and hardly ever been propped Yall get together an plot, popularity over punches Ain't that some damn charity for ya lunches Caught slacking, short stacking all the challengers looking stunted Comes to the crunch it's embarrassing you nothing munchkins (yep the opening bar of this hashed out section was clever,not only for the comparison words used (vegetable n stock) ,and not only for your stealth alias play either,but as a complete bar,very creative that because it shows the thought process behind it,and the fact thought went into it,but all whilst being subtle and it didn't stop there,you carried it through with the truthful stance about J Homicde play via Cuba's plug,this verse had a controlled aggression vibe running all through it too,which in itself is a highlight,nicely expressed that,a solid read from start to end plus a subtleness that some ppl may not see on reading,you let them all know Champ why your the Champ..) Peace.. |
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