Audio Mic: H4ZE - Tour Life (feat. King Digit) |
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H4ZE
Standard Member Joined: 13 July 2013 Location: Florida Status: Offline Points: 1859 Crew: eNtiTy Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-6-0 Form: WWLLLL |
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Posted: 16 July 2017 at 3:41am |
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Nigma
Site Moderator Joined: 25 March 2013 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 4077 Crew: Elision |
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Both verses on their own were dynamic and well executed. Two very different styles. Your flow is really good now. I liked the unique presentation of your feature, the whisper-like presence paired with his chopper style was comparable to Trae the Truth. As a cohesive song I felt the two verses were forced together and especially disliked how abruptly the chorus game after Digits verse.
Was good lyrically but still left more to be desired musically.
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King Jehu
Veteran Joined: 23 January 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6088 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #4 Stats: 54-18-1 Form: WLWWWL |
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I wasn't that big a fan of the hook. I felt it was too repetitive. That said, the flow on the first verse is tight and I enjoyed it. The second verse was a bit of a letdown, but you definitely held your own. I like the background of the video. Definitely fits the theme of being on the road.
Take the "&t=19s" off the link so the video starts at the beginning. As it is, the link takes you to 19 seconds into it. Don't know if that was intentional. |
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Insert something rappy here
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