Open Mic: Final Round: Ya'll Not Fuckin' Wit Me |
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iLL ScriptureZ
Standard Member Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: NJ Status: Offline Points: 2477 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-5-1 Form: LWWLWW |
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Posted: 24 July 2017 at 2:21pm |
...you're honestly a nice dude But I'm a N.W.A. & you gettin' put on ice Cube Ya body in this bag is turnin' a slight blue LP a bystander, I'm Highlander ready to slice Cube This a Mayweather fight Cube, not dancin' but teachin'.. My opponent that all punches thrown are reaches If you're on the throne, this impeachment The mods too for condonin' this treason Of slight of hand perception & bogus misleadin' I'm the grossest with schemes & hopelessly fiendin' For some dope shit from you, but the coke has been weakened This is a joke, you ain't remotely a genius Even though these hoes have spoke their allegiance I'm scopin' then squeezin' on this slow fuck to the end Cuz a mod searched for the thread, must be a magician he said Cuz what was once gone seemed to show up again Call it fabrication but you were the one hidin' the truth Like when Paul Pierce got "hurt" against LA energizin' the troops In this case it backfired to prove That you're like Colin Farrel, to surive, you'll lie in the booth Had you shook, now you baked give Ricky Bobby my word Every bar is a HIIT to trim the fat off ya body of work The verses you drop against me are oddly absurd Guess I was expectin' more than I prolly deserve Real people know honesty hurts, its a bitch to whoever Decided to unhide that thread to claim you never hid it, whatever I couldn't give a fuck less since now Ex & Nigs dissin' This pissin' contest turned to two dickheads to measure Lesson learned here, loyalty isn't as thick as the pressure But I'll still left the site hangin' stiffer then Chester! Some may say I sound bitter, how you figure? It's pleasure To send the same shots with a different Beretta Never play the victim cuz my victims don't get up Lord, your audio made you sound like a cunt & a fag Wanna scrap? You're Gordon Hayward, you ain't wantin' that Jazz His lungs'll collapse from the punches in threads solely & put L in the sky like he smoke for my dead homies Pour out some left OE & watch it soak in the ground Tryna be OG but sound like Homie the Clown Hand me a L, P? L please! Only if I hear his LP Swell P, Bomb P, word to Sean P, You'll be in heaven with Sean P! Your 3 star tracks, are just that, average I hear Mediocrity is somethin' I have surpassed in some years Yeah my audios are old but you know elevation is key You still got 5 years before you start levitatin' to me Shoot me down, fuck a gun, you better get a bazooka Cuz the shit I'm comin' with got the open end of a tuba Mentionin' my name but the only person who fed it was Cuba Ya'll lookin' bi-curious, just have sex with the puta! This was fun & games, I'm done with lames you not fuckin' wit me Anyone comin' for the top spot not fuckin' wit me You're gonna have to send more then a few shots to start fuckin' wit me 'Bout to start fuckin' Rude since respect is not fuckin' wit me Ya'll finished or ya'll done? I ain't gon' say it nomo Yall... not... fuckin'... wit... me |
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daydizzle89
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& put L in the sky like he smoke for my dead homies Pour out some left OE & watch it soak in the ground Tryna be OG but sound like Homie the Clown Hand me a L, P? L please! Only if I hear his LP Swell P, Bomb P, word to Sean P, You'll be in heaven with Sean P! Your 3 star tracks, are just that, average I hear Mediocrity is somethin' I have surpassed in some years Yeah my audios are old but you know elevation is key You still got 5 years before you start levitatin' to me Shoot me down, fuck a gun, you better get a bazooka Cuz the shit I'm comin' with got the open end of a tuba Mentionin' my name but the only person who fed it was Cuba Ya'll lookin' bi-curious, just have sex with the puta!
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Crimson Juice
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Some Venom in the words eh iLL,yeah this was direct in punches/disses,I didn't like
the repeating of the same towards the end and in the middle though,but at least you stressed them enough to make them work still,you seemed to have some grit in the stomach for this one,i liked it,this is turning out (for the neutral) like table tennis,back and forth trying to score points so to speak,good job keep flexing and remember to duck when seeing incoming..peace. |
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SELF ACTIVATE
Standard Member Joined: 05 February 2016 Location: Kemet Status: Offline Points: 1380 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-0 Form: WL |
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...you're honestly a nice dude
But I'm a N.W.A. & you gettin' put on ice Cube Ya body in this bag is turnin' a slight blue LP a bystander, I'm Highlander ready to slice Cube Call it fabrication but you were the one hidin' the truth Like when Paul Pierce got "hurt" against LA energizin' the troops
Somebody call a medic, there's victims everywhere. |
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spume corrupt
Superior Member Joined: 27 April 2011 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 3162 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-1 Form: WLWLLL |
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Just been re reading the recent back and forth stuff
This one really stands out man You fuckin killed it dead here Very entertaining on every level this, was nothing short of brilliant penmanship |
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-Orion-
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Paul Piece and Phone Booth references back to back It's strong...it's very strong Particularly the start and the middle... I got nothing against the way you ended it in terms of the repetition, I just think towards the end in general it didn't have as much firepower Damn tho
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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