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DressToKill
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Posted: 31 October 2017 at 2:22am |
https://soundcloud.com/user-206308494/dtk-reflections I finished this track, let me know what you think. thanks
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The original comeback kid
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Who-Is-You?
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The lyrics are nice. I can definitely feel the vibe you are aiming for.
I just think that your flow and voice sounds kinda corny here. There's an almost regulated growl in your voice. It's like you want to be loud but the neighbors might think you're weird. It's really restricting your authenticity. It's coming off as unnatural and really killing the vibe of the song. I suggest that you focus and study mic presence. Once you feel the most comfortable, which will be the most natural moment, you will kinda veer right into your lane. You will reach your comfort zone and it may even be crucial to your craft overall. But you definitely need to get more comfortable on the mic. Right now, it's awkward. Practice, you'll recognize it when it comes.
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I respect your opinion, thanks for dropping feed
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The original comeback kid
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Bazooka bastard
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sounds a bit like madness. faster flow at the back end was the best bit, why didn't u round it off with a big dirty orrible punchline tho?
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