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Topic: [Text] D-NoS vs Bazooka bastard (0-2) Posted: 02 December 2017 at 5:29pm |
Bazooka wins due to lack of votes. Locked.
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Endeavor
Senior Moderator Wiggle wiggle said the bun that jiggle Joined: 03 April 2009 Location: Your kitchen Status: Offline Points: 10000102 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-4-0 Form: WWLWLW |
Posted: 01 December 2017 at 8:47am |
24 hours left for voting otherwise I'm forced to close this, giving Bazooka the W.
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Ridley Squat
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Posted: 11 November 2017 at 6:10pm |
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Gotta disagree with Bazooka this time ... Yes he took a big risk with this approach, but I enjoyed it, clearly done for the lolz, and as a multiple name flip it does class as direct & personal (you can't say it could be used for anyone else) ... not hitting hard though I'd agree. Highlights for me, all of the first half. Deano's round though... When I first read BB's I honestly thought "haha nice, but of course I'll have to vote for the other guy". But after reading it, I felt otherwise. You didn't need to do much to take this, and indeed your opponent fully expected you to ... but imo you still managed to fall short. The rhyming was horrible even for 1 syllable rhymes, and half of it was indirect. My favourite bit was the B A Zoo Ka scheme ... and I didn't like that at all as it relying on rhyming Ass with Around. Keep at it DNose but MFVGTBB |
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Crimson Juice
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Posted: 05 November 2017 at 9:42pm |
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. This was a close battle here,i thought it was evenly matched really,anyways. BB,so you went down the approach route of displaying different scenarios of using dicing with death,each time using it as a different concept,you definitely got personal with the name flipping too,and your punches were landing also,not to heavy though but landing still,you also showed some skill by attempting doubling dicing with death as multi's at the end of the bars as well,(and although i wasn't a big fan of the concept initially,after another read it grew on me,I succumbed to it),and to extent i disagree with WIY in the fact that it was spatial,you had the set up on the 1st line then punch on the 2nd,(standard format),battle verses are not ment to be rigid like a topical piece,and judging from your last outting,this was more coherent,all in all the highlights to this verse is in the little things (multis/mechanics and usage of alias ect ect).. D Nos this was definitely a big step up from your last battle verse i read,i liked the fact that you were stressing and pulling words out of shape to make them mean more than their intended use,i found your 2nd bar to be your strongest overall as well,your last bar had for some reason a little humour factor withim that made me smirk which is also a plus,as humour makes a punch a punch so props there,and like BB's drop this also was better aimed and directed than your previous battle you had,the thing i have a gripe with,is your 1st bar and the 1st line of your 2nd bar seemed to repeat itself really,and for me i found that made your 1st bar in general a waste,and the fact you put B and A in caps made me think an acronym was occurring,but it didn't pan out that way,still a enjoyable drop.. Overall pluses on both sides here,both came with personals and directed drops,props to both also for making me read each verse twice before calling a winner,and i'll say now this was hard to call on the surface,i had to delve and break apart both pieces,to see the bigger picture,and i found BB's to be my choice,here's why,i feel he had the better contents and personals really,and he's mechanics/concept on the whole was more my preference,sorry D Nos this wasn't easy to call so props dude.. Vote...Bazooka..peace. |
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Who-Is-You?
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Posted: 05 November 2017 at 6:43pm |
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. I feel the punches were light on both sides. The two of you did attack each other though. Bazooka seemed to be a bit less direct though by attacking his gf instead of him. Also it made it seem kinda basic with rhyming "dicing with death" twice. Also that was a whack concept if you ask me. But yes, for the reasons mentioned, D-NoS takes this
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D-NoS
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Posted: 05 November 2017 at 8:23am |
Intensive Aggressor Impressive Aggravater Bazooka's a bitch an ass Ima undress her B for Bitch... A for Ass.. You live in a Zoo and drive crap KA's (car-type) around Challenger Challenging not a challenge I cant manage I'll manage him Thinks he's a bastard but I guess his momma forgot to tell him bout that time I went balls-deep in, dicey creep up ya gals ladder fondling on a regular occasion, I fit in your bitch like a cork in a bottle, ima Caucasian
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Bazooka bastard
Groupie Joined: 30 December 2015 Status: Offline Points: 108 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-0 Form: WL |
Posted: 05 November 2017 at 12:51am |
^^^ You call yourself Fred Dice / Dice said Fred, you're dicing with death,You should know I've checked ya soundcloud dice, n ya deaf, And for the next one I'm incorporating slicing up veg, It's like you're cutting onions with the reaper, that's dicing with death, Your bitch has got so many lice in her head, She's someone not even fake sex addict Jim Dyson would F, Sick of so called punches sort of relating to dicing with death? Well I'll panda ya eyes, black on both sides, like dice in with Def |
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Bazooka bastard
Groupie Joined: 30 December 2015 Status: Offline Points: 108 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-0 Form: WL |
Posted: 03 November 2017 at 11:30pm |
And it's only getting worse
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D-NoS
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Posted: 03 November 2017 at 7:32pm |
Ya kno tha rulies
72 deadline from check
Edited by Endeavor - 01 December 2017 at 8:46am |
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