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DressToKill
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Posted: 05 December 2017 at 3:46am |
Any feedback is appreciated, thanks https://soundcloud.com/user-206308494/anarkey-under-rated-snippet |
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DressToKill
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Thanks a lot Flame, I really appreciate the critique and you taking the time out to listen. As per clarity I upgraded my gear recently and it makes a world of difference
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spume corrupt
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Parts parts of this really shine main, I’m feeling how your voice is coming across especially when them lil aggressive touches kick in
Lyrics are dope in places but do fall down a bit when the occasional cliche predictable parts come in as filler Easily as enjoyable to listen to as anyone else that drops on here of late even if a little less developed Keep on keeping on brother, you going forward all the time Propers |
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DressToKill
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Thanks a lot Spume my dude, you always shoot straight and I appreciate that
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Crimson Juice
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DTK i went on to have a listen and,it's telling me the track can't be displayed
or is unavailable..peace. |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance". |
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DressToKill
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Sorry Crim that should fix it https://soundcloud.com/user-206308494/anarkey-under-rated |
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alicewonder
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I really liked the intro, you kept it short and sweet yet still intriguing 'enough' to properly function as an intro, if you know what I mean. I've listened to a few tracks of yours before (although I didn't feed them I think) and there's a huge difference not only in terms of (as you pointed out yourself) quality of production, but, consequently, and most remarkably, in the sound of your voice. While it still has that significant, 'raw' undertone, there's a smoothness dominating, which is great to see. I also liked the transitions, I thought you did fairly well in that regard. There was one instance, one line really, and it's only a minor point, where it wasn't as smooth as the rest, when you started the 'shot' line. But that's me nitpicking really. Overall, I think there's a tremendous difference to your previous work on here, which is great to see. Glad you shared this one.
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Thanks a lot AW I feel I've gotten a lot more comfortable on the Mic which helps find your groove. Thanks a lot for the feed
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Crimson Juice
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Damn brother man,you be on that no bullshit vibe eh,this was straight fire,im
not going to waffle on about flow/delivery and presence,but what i will talk on is the contents,i was really feeling the Me Myself And I concept here,and it came off like a real man standing on his own 2 legs,by letting the track do your talking which in turn served as a testament to that fact really,and to be honest,that's exactly what i took from this audio,it just seemed to ooze spirt and defiance all whilst saying fuck the haters and continue to kick your way through shit no matter what,(and the new mic is definitely worth whatever you paid for it,it made you sound crystal for me),the energy you layed down within via aggression pitch and tempo made this seep a realness like you got something real to convey,the thing is it can apply to us all,it's that relatable message (do it for yourself) that grips the listener and gives something to them in the process,if their willing to hear it in my opinion,and the beat was ripe to,i loved that pissed off Cello on the strings,in fact I can't find any fault with this track,it's just all pluses and ice cream,real Ripe thanks for sharing... peace. |
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DressToKill
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Thanks a lot for the feed Crim you always drop in depth and it's very much appreciated my dude
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