Open Mic: sliding str8 of the fuckin slopes |
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spume corrupt
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Posted: 12 February 2018 at 11:05pm |
I’m sliding str8 of the fuckin slopes
Think Winter Olympics Go pressing the button Providing the most Sinister digits So the best is coming Blessed eruptions I’ll be your Kim on some mischief Angle bringing ridiculous All gold Like the bling on my wrist is Now fold! As I tell you pussies I love ya Reload and snub ya Before I sing it to bitches What’s the time? Fuck off!!!!!!! I’m above ya..... with anything like scriptures Edited by spume corrupt - 12 February 2018 at 11:29pm |
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daydizzle89
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this had good flow. Short but as we all knoe..... La dead as fuck
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Crimson Juice
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Yeah agreed the flow was slick here,i also liked the structure too,i found this intriguing really,i was at first trying to decrypt it looking for hidden meanings,it pulls a reader in, then i realised this was a selfhype piece,which had a subtle vibe cracking,(hence why I didn't spot it straight away),i guess short and sweet rings true here,i liked it,it was quirky and quaint,and i also agree its been spookily quite in LA of late |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
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Cuba
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Is this some kind of practical joke for which I missed the context? Perhaps a comment on the pointlessness of the Winter Olympics? Who knows
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SELF ACTIVATE
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"All gold
Like the bling on my wrist is" LOL Talk that shit Spume |
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