Open Mic: Word Drop Challenge. (TWD#3 Challenge) March. |
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Schematic
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Posted: 24 March 2018 at 6:58am |
Astral projection enabling our Ghost to Travel
Gravel operating on Mortals Shackled with A Blunted Scalpel A merciless warrior patiently resting in a Forgotten Trench Where Not even hungry vultures converging can take the Rotten Stench The Wierd Reality, They Enslaved Humanity Race with Vanity There is a monster awaiting so be Carefull on the Attic Summoning forbidden servitors gliding Gracefull and Aquatic Took a vow began to Spiritually grow and Meditate Orally Chakras aligned and Gyrate Properly, Blood Pulsate Normally In hopes of vanquising the ones that own my Faith Totally In this way converted to something More than a Legend The Illuminati manipulates your Soul in this Dead End So we advise our Next Friend to infect them, Make Satan the Subject And marvel at the way he telepathically maneuvers A Brobdingnagian Object Blood is the Price The Owl is Wise Mold Concise every Blow is Precise Mind is a laberinth Spewing Demons that have been Ruling for Eons |
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Crimson Juice
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So Schematic good to read your participation in this WD challenge,and this
was a nice entry too,but there is a problem,your way over the 10 line limit,the rules are 10 keywords to be used in 10 lines or less,sorry to come across a dick here with that,but please feel free to touch up or rewrite another verse, if you do decide to continue with this challenge,shoot me a pm and i will clean/delete this thread to make way for your re-submission..peace. |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
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Schematic
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Anyone else has something to Say about the Piece/Peace?
All comment on other raps Pasted On Believe A got another entry on the Open Mic So let's Explore Tonight |
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