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daydizzle89
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Posted: 11 April 2018 at 3:54pm |
Ridiculous fortunes with prehistoric origins
Regions go to war to forage it Warlords work in unison to score a lick Its a practical force driving sorcerers in its purest form, vague concepts of earths forfeiture Vibrations of sulfur, oil is torturing us |
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Nice and to the point. I liked the delivery on this joint. Strong use of the words, I really liked the shorter bar structure in comparison to your other drops.
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Slip
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Yo dizz nice drop short to the point really packs a punch
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See no evil speak no evil silent echo alter ego
inner demon violent beast so warn the mother fucking people |
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Schematic
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Your one is Shoter than Mine
No doubt you are Smarter in Rhyme |
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http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/rapper-t-vs-schematic-horrorcore-02_topic45919.html
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Dntplywelwitothers
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First, starting with the title, this magnifies an issue in a very short straight to the point approach. Really good use of the words, and the opener was strong, you said a mouthful in five words. Flow and rhyming were on point,
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"My name has the most shout outs in the history of rap...."
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