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CHAIN
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Posted: 15 April 2018 at 8:41pm |
Interlocked with your morals, it's a pillar of debri. Kids are not the opps, men don't pillage the deceased 'cause karma'll get you got for milking all that grief. You're Tekashi 69 with no acrylic on your teeth An Illnois ID and pics of children in their briefs. Sexual deviance; the Achilles' heel of creeps Luring kids to your crib with Matilda DVD's. That's your go-to topic, that really is your niche Getting bodied by somebody who speaks English once a week. Woo! Trolling is cool but accountability is key Alphas always do their due diligence to teach. Every move's connected...millipede physique You out here shaking like you drank a cylinder of bleach. Silly me, peeped you Milli Vanilli-ing my peeps If it's not peace then why you're mimicking their speech? Knowing you'd acquit all the Zimmerman police... Men committing sins for the lily white elite. This is Killer Mike versus Vanilla Ice puh-lease Getting @ me looking like Priscilla Presley's niece. Lyrics? Fuck lyrics, your ceiling's at my feet Pitiful 'cause lyrically you're the Krillin of your fleet. Docility on fleek, not built for any beef 'member you were making threads spilling all the tea? Some henchmen almost had them drillers do the deed And that shit wasn't 'bout no syllables on beats. This is what I heard while I was chilling on the beach Kept the villainy discreet like a Bilderberg retreat. "Send me your location" they was feeling like Khalid But I don't know nothing, Sick Witted R.I.P You're talking 'bout snitching and you're talking 'bout prison You're talking 'bout...LISTEN! you're a civilian to a T. I'm a smack in the face, you're a pillow to the cheek And red lights and silhouettes of dildos in your beak. Trolling for attention still concealing your IP Still sucking Richard Spencer's umbilical for feed. A voyeur and vulture who appeals to the fringe On the side of the fence who think Hitler's magnifique. I'm The Predator you combat, you're Mac shouting 'Contact!' Letting off fast wasting artillery on leaves. ..."We Hit Nothing! " this wigga said to Neek That was your 10th diss for the crickets to critique. The proof is in the quiche, I'm dealing with receipts Roll up on me funny get wheelbarrowed 'cross the street. All affiliated geeks know I'm skilled beyond his peak This is Illmatic versus Willow Smith CD's. I'm going at the wolves at silver bullet speeds This is what happens when the village idiot... ..thinks shit is sweet. Get off my dick. Edited by CHAIN - 15 April 2018 at 8:52pm |
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daydizzle89
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all the dildo talk and pedo shit weak. Good rhyming though
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Rutter knows best
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This was flames. I especially like the stuff i bolded. Whole opening section was solid as fuck. You know what you do, i dont need to tell you. Still his was Witty as fuck though, angles were interwoven real nice. Grown man shit. I don't wanna read no back n forths though i gotta say, on the real the skill sets aren't comparable.
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#bananas
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daydizzle89
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look. All the fanboys coming out in support lol. SS gonna be the next one to feed? Bhqhahah
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Endeavor
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Yoooooooo... this was fire flames magma stuff.
Mad quotables on deck but like I said before, that whole henchmen scheme was definitely a highlight. Its basically what Rooter said. |
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#Bananas
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Crimson Juice
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CHAIN i'm feeling this joint right here,the flow was as smooth as a partical traveling
around in the LHC,(no friction or hiccups here),you had a abstract/subtle approach which translated into a calm and collected vibe,in essence the maturity RKB spoke of,and in truth i can't blame Dizzle for playing this down either,as it must of struck a nerve,and being a neutral,i thought this verse was pure ripe as retaliation pieces go, 'its not about taking sides,it's about credit where credit is due',like here,i really enjo- yed this read,in fact i've read it twice now,and each time i draw or seen something i missed on my first attempt,so maybe a 3rd go is called for,because it certainly does warrants it,a real ripe drop that gave me a kick in the pleasure spot on reading..(solid rebuttal)..peace. ps,id put that old tin hat on though and brace yourself for incoming flak,as i feel if Dizzle is pissed,who knows how or what he'll respond with?..peace. |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance". |
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Neek
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Yay! Chain came from hidin' tryna portrait he wilin dusted off his versace frames, the shade was mindless named his highness, but aint land mass - thats curacao island how this pencil pusher think he the staple? ill mush his potatoe sideways known to throw in the towel, he a low brow rico suave lotta street lingo but would cling to madre if beef was grande a complete facade, tryna compete with arms i'd completely deplete this meager pawn with an easy yawn he thinkin' broad equal braun but ill give em a fabolous ass whoopin'- he keep mentionin me in bars. |
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#Bananas
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D.Von Doom
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I can't believe I just read an ass whooping so graphic..technically gifted work here. Unorthodox approach to the usual dizz disses. With that being said FIGHT BACK DIZZ...Chain just busted your lip
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I can only fall off in space...
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-Que-
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Dammm! Made me fuck around and log in just so I can say Fonz that rhyme set was flawless. The angle was supreme.
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iLL ScriptureZ
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The hardest bars are above. Flame thrower response. Your calm, cool demeanor makes bars hit so much harder.
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spume corrupt
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Honestly
Just the milligram of meat for a heart thing! God damn ...... I had to lmfao, that was a monstrous gully type opener |
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Sammy
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yo this may be the very first diss piece from Chain that i've ever read and its dope. you're both homies of mine so i can't get to personal but as far as punches and swag this is that shit right there. That ceilings at my feet bar is mad swag. Although the Willow smith album is dope to me haha, but the illmatic reference was welcoming. good read sir.
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Lord Puente
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