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Bakardi
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Posted: 29 May 2018 at 6:09pm |
Thanks for the feed Neek!
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Neek
Site Moderator Super Mario Slaughterer Joined: 05 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 3862 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-1-0 Form: LWWW |
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your flow is very shaky, the delivery is very dry. the content is borderline corny - its more 2010 party shop boyz than a 2018 future or migos.
this isnt "mainstream", its dumpster bin music. nothing catchy or repeat worthy. its a try hard attempt at being cool and it fails so miserably bad that asking you to never do this shit again was a favor. im sure im missing shit, but theres a small overview of what went wrong. |
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Bakardi
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Can I get a little more solid of a critique please? Keep in mind that I'm not trying to be lyrical, I'm trying to make successful mainstream rap. Thanks.
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Nah b. This dont work.
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Neek
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no.
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Bakardi
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