Text Battle Archive: ruleB VS 2MEO |
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Louie
Veteran Joined: 22 October 2003 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 1062 Text Rank: #9 Stats: 18-6-0 Form: Unknown |
Topic: ruleB VS 2MEO Posted: 26 October 2003 at 11:30pm |
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come on fag reply soon......... 10 line min no hate/dickryde/cru votes lets get this dun quick......so post asap not in 2 weeks FUCK MEO N HIS PART TIME RHYMA'S................. |
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all my life ave been tryin to defy whats wrong and whats right, i jus hope now producing, can sequence my life.....
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2meo
Groupie Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 59 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L |
Posted: 28 October 2003 at 12:19pm | |
My heavy artillery arsenals too much action for this arsenist,Ya claimin ill-powers a match for RR what a farce is this,My talents and skills are ever so extensive, you dont even have a fraction of the percentage,of the ability and lyrical prowess that my strengths is,I let this newbie get-with-my-crew now hes forgetting-who,helped him elevate his game letting him join RR was a regrettful move,don't ya know my crews deadly and yours crews dead,you always a crew emcee never a crew head, |
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I stand on the block pushin' the rock smokin on pot listening to Rassy music!
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Louie
Veteran Joined: 22 October 2003 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 1062 Text Rank: #9 Stats: 18-6-0 Form: Unknown |
Posted: 28 October 2003 at 8:08pm | |
You let me in real rhymaz thats wot guna make this funny. cos now this "cru head" is not good enough to be my understudy/ am cannibilistic eat yea like my kentucky fried chicken. meo's into hanging with domanatrix taking a whippin/ "you helped me elevate", that comment makes you mentally fucked up. remember the *rebirth tourny, even joe got this girl shook/ these skillz have overtook you and your cru along time ago thats why i left. meo skillz resemble a *mini metro, mines a nitrous kitted corvette/ when i say this direct .u know am gonna be rite.... back down before you get dissed as worse as you did on *MYRAPSITE/ An fuck being complexed.aint guna waste my time ,sadly meo its all over. you that much of a faggot you should change your name to BEN DOVER!!!!!!!!!!! (HAHAHAHAHAHAHA)/
*rebirth tourny= for those who dont know its the last tourny of the old l/a..(meo got shook write a half rhyme) *mini metro= a shitty banged up car from the uk *MYRAPSITE= scottys site before the old l/a. |
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all my life ave been tryin to defy whats wrong and whats right, i jus hope now producing, can sequence my life.....
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2meo
Groupie Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 59 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L |
Posted: 28 October 2003 at 8:15pm | |
get voting
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I stand on the block pushin' the rock smokin on pot listening to Rassy music!
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Ecliptik
Newbie Joined: 28 October 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 185 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-0-0 Form: WWW |
Posted: 28 October 2003 at 8:17pm | |
Aight... heres my breakdown: 2meo: You've elevated quite alot...
- That was quite nice... but half of it was just braggin which doent hit ya opponent. The rest of tha verse was decent, personal.. closer was eh. overall verse seemed too short and poorly structured. seemed like u didnt really try. Rule B:
^ Hahaha true Overall ya verse was structured better and your attempt at punches were superior. You need to incorperate some wordplay tho. Vote- Rule B Return the favor and vote on me v/s Sketch
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Senor Perfecto
Veteran 1st Battle Winner! AM I 'ECK Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: Manchester Status: Offline Points: 3272 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: #6 Stats: 66-36-2 Form: WLWLWL |
Posted: 28 October 2003 at 8:34pm | |
2meo, nice multis but the verse didn't flow right. Maybe it was your layout but it seemed like a very short verse. Rule B, more aggressive punches. OK flow. Vote: Rule. Adios... |
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Sketch1ne
Newbie Joined: 28 October 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 120 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-1-0 Form: Unknown |
Posted: 28 October 2003 at 8:48pm | |
2meo.. I cant deny that you havent improved.. but the verse simply wasnt long enough. You had a horrible paragraph structure and the punches were lacking. Rule B.. a better verse, seemed like you thought it out and put more effort into it than 2meo did with his. Some solid tries at wordplay and also some personals in there. Overall you impressed me more. Vote- Rule B |
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2meo
Groupie Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 59 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L |
Posted: 28 October 2003 at 8:52pm | |
you take round 1
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I stand on the block pushin' the rock smokin on pot listening to Rassy music!
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Louie
Veteran Joined: 22 October 2003 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 1062 Text Rank: #9 Stats: 18-6-0 Form: Unknown |
Posted: 28 October 2003 at 9:25pm | |
aite cheers for the votes ..... 3/0ko topic closed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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all my life ave been tryin to defy whats wrong and whats right, i jus hope now producing, can sequence my life.....
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