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Form: LNWWWW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 October 2018 at 1:33pm
"master degree burn after a heat-stroke of genius. " 

Bitten from Rhyme Asylum - Poison Penmanship 
https://genius.com/Rhyme-asylum-poison-penmanship-lyrics

Which leads me to believe more of this is not your own work. 
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Form: LWWLWW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 October 2018 at 1:22pm
Originally posted by Smoothtung Smoothtung wrote:


* they have found metal snow in the mountains of Venus


So look..

I read
scientific Zionistic hieroglyphs in Thai linguistics.
Mine are carved in vinyl disks n' rhyme of ships and flight ballistics.
Might permit a rhyming clinic dominant like holocausts.
Learned to write the finest lyrics compliments to Robert Frost..
I’d never tried to sever ties with letters but the pleasure died,
pressure forges treasures but this pressure more than weathered mine.
I wished to guide a charter toward the heavens but the devil told
to live and die a martyr ‘for these heavens mend a rebels soul.
Listen though..
This..
alchemy is patently on balance with a valency like galaxies and gravity when dropping snow on Venus.. 
I traveled through the apogee so gallantly.. just ask me.. 
Got a
master degree burn after a heat-stroke of genius. 
I'm 
father time's modernized broader mind authorized to colonize fallen tribes of eden.. 
Bottom line
philosophised, modified and optimized these flawless lines like this was the solemn rise of Phoebus..
Gimme back the load of shit I stole and bit to mould and fit the hole I ripped in my own soul from all these fucking opiates.
Know that when I wrote this shit i WROTE this shit no stollen shit this goat is fit for thrones n shit..
Odysseus's holiness..

Smooth you recycled the first part of your verse here. As well as here. Which leads me to 1 of 2 conclusions. 1.) The second half of your verse is new. 2.) Considering the previous evidence in which you recycled twice, I'm leaning that you pulled it from another previous verse of yours which I could not find. 

Also, this shit is way longer than 16 lines. Get your fucking shit together.

Lastly, a DQ is pending as I consult with other judges on the matter.
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Form: WWWLWN 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:25am

* they have found metal snow in the mountains of Venus


So look..

I read
scientific Zionistic hieroglyphs in Thai linguistics.
Mine are carved in vinyl disks n' rhyme of ships and flight ballistics.
Might permit a rhyming clinic dominant like holocausts.
Learned to write the finest lyrics compliments to Robert Frost..
I’d never tried to sever ties with letters but the pleasure died,
pressure forges treasures but this pressure more than weathered mine.
I wished to guide a charter toward the heavens but the devil told
to live and die a martyr ‘for these heavens mend a rebels soul.
Listen though..
This..
alchemy is patently on balance with a valency like galaxies and gravity when dropping snow on Venus.. 
I traveled through the apogee so gallantly.. just ask me.. 
Got a
master degree burn after a heat-stroke of genius. 
I'm 
father time's modernized broader mind authorized to colonize fallen tribes of eden.. 
Bottom line
philosophised, modified and optimized these flawless lines like this was the solemn rise of Phoebus..
Gimme back the load of shit I stole and bit to mould and fit the hole I ripped in my own soul from all these fucking opiates.
Know that when I wrote this shit i WROTE this shit no stollen shit this goat is fit for thrones n shit..
Odysseus's holiness..




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