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iLL ScriptureZ
Standard Member Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: NJ Status: Offline Points: 2477 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-5-1 Form: LWWLWW |
Topic: [BAE] Ridley Squat vs Smoothtung Posted: 01 October 2018 at 12:50pm |
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Smoothtung
Standard Member Joined: 09 December 2012 Status: Offline Points: 2222 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-8-3 Form: WWWLWN |
Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:25am |
* they have found metal snow in the mountains of Venus So look.. I read scientific Zionistic hieroglyphs in Thai linguistics. Mine are carved in vinyl disks n' rhyme of ships and flight ballistics. Might permit a rhyming clinic dominant like holocausts. Learned to write the finest lyrics compliments to Robert Frost.. I’d never tried to sever ties with letters but the pleasure died, pressure forges treasures but this pressure more than weathered mine. I wished to guide a charter toward the heavens but the devil told to live and die a martyr ‘for these heavens mend a rebels soul. Listen though.. This.. alchemy is patently on balance with a valency like galaxies and gravity when dropping snow on Venus.. I traveled through the apogee so gallantly.. just ask me.. Got a master degree burn after a heat-stroke of genius. I'm father time's modernized broader mind authorized to colonize fallen tribes of eden.. Bottom line philosophised, modified and optimized these flawless lines like this was the solemn rise of Phoebus.. Gimme back the load of shit I stole and bit to mould and fit the hole I ripped in my own soul from all these fucking opiates. Know that when I wrote this shit i WROTE this shit no stollen shit this goat is fit for thrones n shit.. Odysseus's holiness.. |
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iLL ScriptureZ
Standard Member Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: NJ Status: Offline Points: 2477 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-5-1 Form: LWWLWW |
Posted: 03 October 2018 at 1:22pm |
Smooth you recycled the first part of your verse here. As well as here. Which leads me to 1 of 2 conclusions. 1.) The second half of your verse is new. 2.) Considering the previous evidence in which you recycled twice, I'm leaning that you pulled it from another previous verse of yours which I could not find. Also, this shit is way longer than 16 lines. Get your fucking shit together. Lastly, a DQ is pending as I consult with other judges on the matter.
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The Law
Site Moderator God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 03 October 2018 at 1:33pm |
"master degree burn after a heat-stroke of genius. "
Bitten from Rhyme Asylum - Poison Penmanship https://genius.com/Rhyme-asylum-poison-penmanship-lyrics Which leads me to believe more of this is not your own work.
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Neek
Site Moderator Super Mario Slaughterer Joined: 05 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 3862 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-1-0 Form: LWWW |
Posted: 03 October 2018 at 1:39pm |
wow... incredible.
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#Bananas
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iLL ScriptureZ
Standard Member Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: NJ Status: Offline Points: 2477 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-5-1 Form: LWWLWW |
Posted: 03 October 2018 at 1:47pm |
Yeah, this is fucking ridiculous. You're definitely removed from the tournament and the Mods will probably make a decision on banning you, again. You're a fucking turd. To think, after I said I wouldn't collab with you, you still supported the event I put on, I figured, why not give you a shot. Then, turn around and make a mockery out of it with your blatant, retarded bullshit. The disrespect you show to other peoples intelligence is remarkable.
Ridley, on the behalf of this idiot, I apologize. You will move on to battle someone else. If you have started writing for this battle, I hope it turns into a dope ass OM. If you want, I'd gladly use it in Self's "Deconstruct the Bars" thread. LMK.
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Neek
Site Moderator Super Mario Slaughterer Joined: 05 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 3862 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-1-0 Form: LWWW |
Posted: 03 October 2018 at 1:50pm |
@iLL... before you scrap this.. see if the homie Stalin can step in. he has dope ass multi's.
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#Bananas
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iLL ScriptureZ
Standard Member Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: NJ Status: Offline Points: 2477 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-5-1 Form: LWWLWW |
Posted: 03 October 2018 at 1:53pm |
Word Neek, Just PM'd him.
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daydizzle89
Superior Member Joined: 23 July 2014 Status: Offline Points: 3805 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LWWLLW |
Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:01pm |
Holy Fucking Junkie |
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Ridley Squat
Street Team Joined: 20 November 2015 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 830 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-6-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:03pm |
Jesus.
Well ... based on the concept "Content can be anything, but you're judged on relevance" ... what I wrote so far was tailored to him ... (cos I figured otherwise it would easy to use a recycled verse). So I'd be started again regardless, |
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iLL ScriptureZ
Standard Member Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: NJ Status: Offline Points: 2477 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-5-1 Form: LWWLWW |
Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:15pm |
I had a hunch this may be the case. Let me deliberate with the judges and see what we can do for you. I'm inclined to give you this W and new battle parameters with a new opponent.
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Smoothtung
Standard Member Joined: 09 December 2012 Status: Offline Points: 2222 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-8-3 Form: WWWLWN |
Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:22pm |
What the hell man I didn't bite shit
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Smoothtung
Standard Member Joined: 09 December 2012 Status: Offline Points: 2222 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-8-3 Form: WWWLWN |
Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:24pm |
And I refined a couple of my favorite concepts... and?
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Rutter knows best
Senior Moderator Joined: 15 March 2014 Location: Manny hood Status: Offline Points: 4529 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-12-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:27pm |
You fucked up dude whatever way you look at it. Make better choices.
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#bananas
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Smoothtung
Standard Member Joined: 09 December 2012 Status: Offline Points: 2222 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-8-3 Form: WWWLWN |
Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:27pm |
They are different bars. They have different words and different meanings.
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Smoothtung
Standard Member Joined: 09 December 2012 Status: Offline Points: 2222 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-8-3 Form: WWWLWN |
Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:28pm |
And the heat stroke line? Dog... That idea literally popped into my head last night
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Smoothtung
Standard Member Joined: 09 December 2012 Status: Offline Points: 2222 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-8-3 Form: WWWLWN |
Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:29pm |
I ain't even making this up..
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Rutter knows best
Senior Moderator Joined: 15 March 2014 Location: Manny hood Status: Offline Points: 4529 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-12-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:31pm |
Regardless you recycled your verse. No Bueno
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#bananas
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Smoothtung
Standard Member Joined: 09 December 2012 Status: Offline Points: 2222 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-8-3 Form: WWWLWN |
Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:33pm |
Nah I didn't dog I took 3 bars that I was refining for an open and decided to build off em for this. Had no idea that'd be no bueno especially since they aren't the same bars anymore
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The Law
Site Moderator God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:35pm |
Honestly, I wouldn't buy anything that comes from you. This isn't the first time you've bit. And last time we found it to be multiple pieces of your work. Just putting your username and biting in google, we can see you were accused on another site in the past as well.
The fact that you had to recycle old lines just shows you struggle to write anything new and resort to biting and recycling. If you go back and look at previous bit work, including the play in this drop, it's night and day in the quality from the lines you bit to your own.
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