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AshleyKaos
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Posted: 20 October 2018 at 10:04am |
I'mma feign for leavin' em deceased I'mma soul snatchin thief that visits in your sleep I'mma snake who needs to eat Appetite in need of meat, the Carnage feels so sweet Fatalities for those who don't believe You resemble me, might walk past me in the streets My disguise is so discreet My victims, "condem them" Seoul is where I send them! Christ tried to mend them But I lured then tempted till it was to late for redemption Another victory for this dark lord! Humans keep begging me for encore's So i make my demons all sound off Send them to give the world what they asked for Swarming like task force Rain evil in down pours These spirits all at war I'mma take this Earth over like Castro I must be an asshole who set the mark of the beast in place A 666 placed in the middle of your face What can I say, I'm the fucking Messiah for "Christ's Sake" False prophet? Currently forlorn An evil being dorment till I'm transformed to a war lord Sneak attack like this prophecy is written in Morse code I live in the North Pole cause I'm ruthless & stone cold Eat your heart and severe your torso Shit turns me on like watching some porno..... Canable tendencies.. don't know whats gotten into me ? I've just been evil for centuries I'mma satanic entity here to forsake all your sanity Possession of families since our lord ain't savin' me Make em' think salvation is make believe Then they all come straight to me I'm in hell and I'm sitting pretty Fuck what God thinks fitting I'm In love with living shity I feel no pity so lustful that it's sicknening Good hearts sicken me Chaos my child that didn't get no chrisenting Content with the date that God has given me so wait and see |
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NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME
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haiduk
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This is awesome.
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Schematic
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http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/rapper-t-vs-schematic-horrorcore-02_topic45919.html
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spume corrupt
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First three lines and I was hooked
You brought this from the inside the zone Very crisp,easy flow some of the best writing I seen you do Ash Kinda wish you had of come with a little bit white rabbit conspiracy theories and tied the title in a bit better Anyway loved the read keep doing you |
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Objective
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Dope piece. Slight fillers here and there but that's kinda expected from pieces like these.
False prophet? Currently forlorn An evil being dorment till I'm transformed to a war lord Sneak attack like this prophecy is written in Morse code I live in the North Pole cause I'm ruthless & stone cold ^These 4 bars were insane. My fav in your piece for sure. Definitely a good read, keep writing.
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Concrete
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If am not mistaken this is your best OM yet AK, seeing writers get tighter is nice. If you're still at it keep doing what you did and beyond.
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