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rhetorical
Site Moderator Joined: 14 February 2014 Location: Florida Status: Offline Points: 807 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-1-0 Form: WWL |
Topic: ...:::WWC Week 12:::... Posted: 05 November 2018 at 5:48pm |
Due date: Saturday 11/10 @ 11:59 (Eastern) Post your verse in this thread! Line limit: 12-16 lines. …:::Voting:::.. Once this week has ended, I would like for everyone to PM me with their top 3 for the week. You do not have to be a participant to vote. No voting for yourself. And just so there is no confusion, the line limit rules are in full effect. I will reveal who everyone voted for in the magazine. Here is your topic, best of luck Edited by rhetorical - 13 November 2018 at 1:33pm |
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iLL ScriptureZ
Standard Member Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: NJ Status: Offline Points: 2477 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-5-1 Form: LWWLWW |
Posted: 06 November 2018 at 1:38am |
Tension was thick & tight as a violen strung This was music to my ears not a si-o-lent hum Been waitin’ for the day to try out this club Safety off but the holster strap tight on my gun Stickin’ to my thigh like it was high in the slums Gorilla invasion, we decided to bum.. Rush, these villagers places in the night where they hung We’re the killers of faces here to violate scum They’re meaningless the scene is lifeless as chum Mommas hold they child & run despite of the blood Upholdin’ the righteous is the type I’ve become Brandished my gun & struck her twice with the butt Doin’ just what I want, if they’re not white they are mud She’s facedown, kickin’ her lifeless & numb Turn her over to see the sight of my mum |
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Crimson Juice
Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW |
Posted: 06 November 2018 at 9:51am |
Mimickin' a modern day Gladiator a transparent shield in hand,
I'm distinguishin' out demonstrators by the order of command, Via authority our priority is to protect shops & their commodity, From a minority hell bent on looting currency & items of quality, A shooting & unemployment was the cause of our deployment, Nervously im not feelin' buoyant about my current appointment, Chantin' loud a crowd ready to blow up like a mushroom cloud, Acting intimidating & proud i use my shield like it was a shroud, & with a baton on my shield i bang a rhythm hoping they'll yield, My identity is concealed as we march torwards the battle field, Mumberling i begin to curse because the mob doesnt disperse, We now become immersed by stone & flames via this outburst, Then comes the clash all around me lies broke objects & glass, The air is filled with tear gas but it don't deter this rioting mass, |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance". |
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Rutter knows best
Senior Moderator Joined: 15 March 2014 Location: Manny hood Status: Offline Points: 4529 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-12-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 06 November 2018 at 10:08pm |
These gritty streets, where the smell of pity reeks, Riots n looting the only language the city speaks, Thousands of soldiers, not one 'bout no military Black n yellow ring out, they swarm like killer bees We the emergency crew, haven't you turned on the news This a perfect excuse to put some hurt on the youth A curfew or two, wouldn't be surprised if i murder a few Ain't a merciful dude..wrong place wrong time its curtains for you Nobody give a fuck bout your version of truth Your searching for freedom in footlocker thats the burden of proof I'll Go full purge on you dudes, i'm either evil or crazy, Same people not making a livin.. the same people who made me Only time my heart beating when i'm beating the lazy, I'm haunting there nightmares while i sleep like a baby Edited by Rutter knows best - 07 November 2018 at 7:55pm |
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#bananas
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Neek
Site Moderator Super Mario Slaughterer Joined: 05 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 3862 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-1-0 Form: LWWW |
Posted: 07 November 2018 at 2:09am |
look at us, im almost disgusted complete mockery, how to spend the populus budget just walkin around, looking like commoner justice wandering dust bins, trashed dirtballs, awfully suspect. our whole outfit, front to back, it's comedy, it..just is. "broken men", walk of shame.. the nominee crushed us "Halloween, 2018"… "What Not To Do: for 500" lost a costume contest: Shamu and her husband hippie love, ole Bonaroo type fuckshit we came through, Call of Duty squad destruction but nahhh, let Julie win - her self esteem's important fuck me, and fuck the homies, no celebratory tokens all we got left, is this pic, I feel the jealousy explodin' didn't do it for the 'Gram, no tellin me it's dope when… EVERYBODY COMMENTING NEVER EVEN VOTED!!! |
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#Bananas
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rhetorical
Site Moderator Joined: 14 February 2014 Location: Florida Status: Offline Points: 807 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-1-0 Form: WWL |
Posted: 07 November 2018 at 8:11pm |
daydizzle89's verse . . .
Another day another dollar
How else am i supposed feed my daughter
Screams that im a monster got me bothered
Rocks hurt, thown by modern day marauders
Enslaved by politics looking to slaughter
Spraying jets of water off at the brawlers
Disorder i prevent with honor
The hotter the day, more start the shit talking
Walking away while screaming im a racist
Blaming me for why they cant get a paycheck
playing with me cuz they still live in their parents basement
Face masks screaming in all black while masing kids
Faceless pricks with misplaced hate is the basics
Step in my way and you will need a facelift
Looking for the fifteen seconds of getting famous
Waiting for me to give them that Freddy Grey shit
Edited by rhetorical - 07 November 2018 at 11:26pm |
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The Rap Daemon
Standard Member Joined: 05 August 2015 Location: Purgatory Status: Offline Points: 1108 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-14-0 Form: LWLWWL |
Posted: 07 November 2018 at 11:24pm |
Police shouldn't get the bad rep they get in entirety
Whether they're here to enforce rules or protect the society What they do may seem oppressive, but violence speaks The rest is a quiet scene and you don't get it, you cry for peace But are happy to riot to give a message to spite the mean- -machine and support misconduct 'long as metal is flying free But they're just people who have to dress to provide and feed It's a never ending cycle and you're part of the problem you try to cease The reason enforcing rules sounds negative might just be The fact you're all a bunch of rebellious idiots high in greed It's not that I'm about denouncing issues arising, see- -incidents like the one with Michael Brown were definite times police- -failed to be justified, but you're too apprehensive to find belief And the news is called coverage 'coz it limits what eyes can see You hear about it more, but that's because internet has a wider reach Not because it happens more, you've lost sight in BS and you're heavily blinded, see? |
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Faggot
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CHAIN
Standard Member Joined: 14 November 2006 Status: Offline Points: 2769 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-0 Form: LWWLWW |
Posted: 08 November 2018 at 10:40pm |
Had him like Ali after Cassius read Qurans Ratchet in his palm, in a rather nonchalant... Manner he aimed it at the paddy wagon, calm 'cause Jakes be as flaky as smashing up croissants And them without their gat's like the Cavs without Lebron "Even pros go to jail where your blackness is a con Where the avenues have turned into a MAGA hat-a-thon" "They will have to pay for what happened to my mom" Just another Sandra Bland that the Kavanaughs have harmed He was not gonna stop till Babylon was gone 'Cause "justice was never in a cracker's lexicon" He overheard the static and the chatter that was on... The cop radios and their tactical response Straps another bomb to his jacket, now he's armed... With shrapnel that could blast through satin and chiffon... 'Cause their operation's name is "assassinate Trayvon" Edited by CHAIN - 08 November 2018 at 11:07pm |
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rhetorical
Site Moderator Joined: 14 February 2014 Location: Florida Status: Offline Points: 807 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-1-0 Form: WWL |
Posted: 13 November 2018 at 1:33pm |
still collecting votes, please get em in everyone
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