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GDub
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Posted: 25 February 2019 at 6:48pm |
I recorded this song over and over until I was satisfied. I didn't record in a studio like I usually do but I recorded on my turtle beach headset and I edited the vocals with Audacity.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HoMWghu8IW8
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Nigma
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Yo. The recording isn't bad, you even did some double time on that rocketing line. I'd say use that line as a model for how all your end rhymes should sound. Your biggest problem is the writing. You can rerecord something a million times, but it's only going to turn out so good when the writing behind it is weak. This was generic, no concepts, just shit that's been said a million times tbh. Good effort but work on your pen game
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D-NoS
Groupie Joined: 10 October 2014 Location: UK-Wales Status: Offline Points: 207 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-6-0 Form: LLLLLL |
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I'm just gonna say, some of it sounded not well rehearsed.. some parts offbeat.
I love music that's why I write, I don't read poetry, except other raps, guess I an audio head.. Good effort tho and keep it up G |
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