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iLL ScriptureZ
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Posted: 31 May 2019 at 5:59pm |
Light the flame to the fortune it’s a craft I perfected It’s icing the cake with the scraps that I’m left with The height of fame was the torture I hadn’t been sentenced Lines of fate & hunger strikes my frame famished & friendless Despite the pain from the corner I’ve been trapped & dependent Griping the same, lifers to game grabbing for weapons Slicing for change, knife to the veins like I ain’t have the attention Seeking love ‘til the reaper come grasping my legs ‘n Kicking & screaming, isn’t this dreaming? Dragging to deathbeds Write my name on the order this wrap with a message Wait… must’ve forgot… That I stay strapped, no studs or dykes Scuds in flight to take out hubs like a grumpy wife Relatable warfare… In your layer swingin’ that jawn like I’m dustin’ mites One eye closed aimin’ this AR like Buddy Christ To make a top explode like some bubbly iced This that, junkie juice you shoot, in the booth I boot Kick this habit somethin’ tragic plus it abuse the youth Make ya moms disappear like she excused the use ‘Specially when you gone & put the you in “poof” Watch these muhfuckas think & others face screwed with “oofs” This that backdoor screen, you threw the oop Unlocked doors, so I ain’t gotta go through the hoops Socks only, slidin’ on the floor as I scoot in rooms No creaks, blown beaks… think I flew the coop I’m gone…
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Crimson Juice
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mmm this was nice, the flow was solid throughout plus there was a lot in the
way of content to digest here, that metaphor/simile/anology about husband and wife was simple but real Ripe, i get the impression that this is acting like a goodbye text/message (which i hope it isn't) for heads here at LA, I'm just hopping i've got it misconstrued on reading, as i haven't had much time to digest it all completely yet, as i've only breezed through it,i'll give it another whirl when i get home and leave if needs be a more detailed feedback post. Ripe...peace. |
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