Text Battle Archive: Beans Vs Blood Eclipse |
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Beans
Superior Member Joined: 12 October 2013 Location: MA Status: Offline Points: 6718 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 95-24-5 Form: WWWWWW |
Topic: Beans Vs Blood Eclipse Posted: 06 September 2019 at 5:19pm |
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1-2 Season 1 Final Champ
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Blood Eclipse
Groupie Joined: 21 April 2017 Location: South Africa Status: Offline Points: 58 Crew: Pending Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-4-0 Form: LLLL |
Posted: 07 September 2019 at 11:34am |
Beans?? I don't know much about you, but I'll gash you open like opening a KOO tin with a knife
The pen i write with has Led, this lad into a slaughter, the foreign ammo In my Russian revolver enables me to draw first blood like John Rambo, In other words the clip will ghost this buster without any Box office numbers. His lyrics ain't got no feel in em, so punch for punch I'll box off his numb bars. Boy lyrically i bring terror to Mics but sometimes I'm extra nice with combo's tougher than Mike’s. So the minute that bell rings, you'll get snuffed with a right. Nikka the difference between you and i in this light beef is that you marketable and I’m remarkable. Either way We’re nothing alike, and you act the way you do because your mother’s a dyke. I know dudes in the slammer who used to give your father pipe, Like bend over bitch, stop moving and quit crying!!!!!!!! So its ah parent(apparent) that you destined to be a hoe, when it comes to exquisite rhyming I'm extraordinary. Bro you should switch your name from Beans to lingerie cause where(wear) you at, you a down (w)right misfit and I'm lyrically gifted even Darwin knows I'm a Mad scientist, me and the mic have a beautiful chemistry in the lab therefore(the four) the weaponry i wield will put this bitch in a bag like a poodle owned by a rich white hag.[URL= ][/URL] |
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Beans
Superior Member Joined: 12 October 2013 Location: MA Status: Offline Points: 6718 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 95-24-5 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 10 September 2019 at 3:04am |
Blood eclipse
Peeped your OM “chopstick Business” ... Listen faggot... Gotta knife so sharp, way it cuts your head off’s amazing Then I’m bagging up Blood quicker than any Red Cross Donations I’m relaxed eatin Sushi... you ain’t defined as a threat & the only “Chop Stick Business” you in’ll be removing those from the side of your head I beefed w/Neek & the best of’em, kid get ya rank up Leave ya teeth on the street - you think Snitching is Gangsta No DJ’ll rep you! Your bars are hardly a worry Flame’ll have you beat on sight! & this ain’t the start of his tourney Fuck this dweeb, Beans bout to rip’em wit clout Cos I’m trying to delete his goofy ass along with that faggot Missions account This woman can’t hang, hit’em w/a hook & a left Then roll up to Blood Pad..& Stab this pussy to death Get out a line man? I’ll have your back touchdown when the heaters enter Plus the way I don’t move when you snap could rival the Steelers center |
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1-2 Season 1 Final Champ
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Mitch.Wagwaan
Groupie Joined: 21 June 2014 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 380 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-5-1 Form: LNLWWW |
Posted: 10 September 2019 at 3:13pm |
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Blood Eclipse; I wasn't feeling your opener. The Pen/Led play had potential (Even though Pencils have led not pens) but it didn't really work although it did have a nice flow. Again wasnt feeling the second bar, Ghost Buster didn't really hit. The self hype Tyson play in the third was wack. The only punch in the fourth was calling his mother a Dyke which was elementary and unnecessary. Fifth bar was an utter mess, the Ah Parent play didn't work and didn't need an expo. Same goes for the rest, messy. The flow in your first two bars was alright but you lost your way after that. Overall not the best piece but you had some good ideas for plays but just need to work on expanding those concepts and finding a fit. Beans; Opener was aaight, flowed nice and hit with the Red Cross jab. Second wasn't bad, the Chop Stick play was okay but wasnt solid. Third bar was hella stretched but the tourney play was okay. Fourth bar was decent, punch hit. The rest wasnt great, flow was out and nothing stood out. Overall a few decent punches but a choppy flow. Vote; Beans. Beans opener was the best of the battle and also had another decent hit with the deleting accounts jab. |
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Crimson Juice
Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW |
Posted: 10 September 2019 at 7:39pm |
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Blood Eclipse. This wasn't a bad verse as persay, but it did lack in power in the punch department, you showed the aggression but the punches were more of jabs really,you had a wealth of info here to come at Beans, shit there's even photos if you just did some homework that you could have used, i feel you dropped the ball somewhat here, and dont get me twisted the verse was all right on the whole, it's biggest problem was it came off as indirect, and not that well aimed, except for mentioning he's alias once maybe twice but its too generic. Beans. I really liked your first 2 bars, especially bar 2 as you tied in a concept to his OM that made the punch land cleanly and hard, because sushi is eaten with chopsticks although you took your foot off the peddle somewhat, (as this guy can throw hard punches), you would on the norm lace the whole verse with punches, but here you did have a few jabs popping, the DJ Flame reference throw me some untill id rembered his up an coming tourney, (at first I thought you was implying there one in the same, like a double acco- untant.. lol.) ^^Or at least I think I got that right Vote....Beans... peace. |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
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Vellum
Standard Member Joined: 07 October 2013 Location: Connecticut Status: Offline Points: 492 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 24-2-1 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 18 September 2019 at 12:02am |
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. if for no other reason than the fact that I feel like his verse was written directly for his opponent and only his opponent. My vote goes to Beans
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Crimson Juice
Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW |
Posted: 19 September 2019 at 4:01pm |
3-0 KO Beans wins.
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
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