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Noumenon
Suspended Joined: 15 September 2019 Status: Offline Points: 101 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-3-0 Form: LLL |
Topic: iLL ScriptureZ VS Noumenon Posted: 27 September 2019 at 1:33am |
I read scientific papers that relay what we're observin'
not some dusty Scripture that puts faith in mere assertions like for instance, when you make a statement here bismerchin' the name of people you ain't even heard of just for exerting more effort in a day than you made in a year, the burden of proof is on you, let's debate the clear aversion you have to critical thought, you pitiful twat you're an imbecile distraught due to your minimal cock You dare to call me an idiot when you cringe at the pros- -pect of intellectual debate? you must be simple as rocks I won't skin em' and chop em' just drop him into the pot cook em' with the lid of it off so I can sit and just watch boil him alive, before I dip him in sauce bit em', but didn't like the subtle taste of bitch that he's got I read your new world order shit looking for some valid prose but it just sounded like you been watching too much Alex Jones you're chemically imbalanced dome is now exposed you sounded so inarticulate, your lack of prowess shows it sure isn't prudent to spew conservative views in my presence surely you've heard of why the many are servin' the few it's called class, and you're reaffirmin' it through you're mindless regurgitating of fake shit you heard on fox news I read that bullshit you wrote, it was absurd as the new world order shit, besmirchin' the true left for what neo-liberals do they're as worthless as you capitalist serpents that use the state to mitigate some concerns with a slew of social programs, but never truly start reversin' the plu- -tocracy cause' they serve it, and soon true socialism will emerge to subdue the primitive and submerge it under the surface of truth |
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iLL ScriptureZ
Standard Member Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: NJ Status: Offline Points: 2477 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-5-1 Form: LWWLWW |
Posted: 01 October 2019 at 5:08pm |
iLL been fasting, you need a prayer like its Ramadan Basic as fuck, that why you left the pH off phenomenon Carry on with those fairy tales with leprechauns Trying sound smart just a dumbass with lexicon Sprinting on every post not realizing it’s a marathon What made you think you could square dance in the octagon Only person as dope as me is in the mirror I put my product on …Your It factor is being a clown at Comicon In fact, sit back ‘fore my pimp hand leave you bitch smacked The impact fold you in half like a dish rag Been had bars, these punches got a kickback Give this hill billy Riff Raff metal but not his tin hat Scriptz that goon, use caution when you speak Acting woke is just nonsense from a sheep Use your conscience, can’t be conscious if you sleep Since when did LA get Mose from The Office on a beat?! You’ll get shanked right, as your golfing for the green How does iron deficiency work if you’re coughing up ya spleen? Are you as off-putting and as awkward as you seem? You’re on LA, like a celebrity stalker in the street Mocking all these artists, you’re a bother and a freak Making up for the time in school you were put in lockers as a geek Can tell by the mullet, you mean business, I get it But a part in the back is a bad business decision Scripturez a legend, maybe that’s more of vision than mission But a statement that shows the difference between the finish and the finished You're welcome.
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daydizzle89
Superior Member Joined: 23 July 2014 Status: Offline Points: 3805 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LWWLLW |
Posted: 01 October 2019 at 5:10pm |
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. vote - scriptz nuff said.
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Mitch.Wagwaan
Groupie Joined: 21 June 2014 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 380 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-5-1 Form: LNLWWW |
Posted: 01 October 2019 at 6:32pm |
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. NOM// I read scientific papers that relay what we're observin' not some dusty Scripture that puts faith in mere assertions like for instance, when you make a statement here bismerchin' the name of people you ain't even heard of just for exerting more effort in a day than you made in a year, the burden of proof is on you, let's debate the clear aversion The structure, flow and lyrics were pretty good in this to be fair and a nice bit of wordplay but there was no punchline. That's your opening three bars bro, you gotta atleast throw a punch. you have to critical thought, you pitiful twat you're an imbecile distraught due to your minimal cock You dare to call me an idiot when you cringe at the pros- -pect of intellectual debate? you must be simple as rocks Not feeling this either. Gone in with something relevant but not really pulled out off. I won't skin em' and chop em' just drop him into the pot cook em' with the lid of it off so I can sit and just watch boil him alive, before I dip him in sauce bit em', but didn't like the subtle taste of bitch that he's got The third third line threw this all off but the last line was aaight. Made me chuckle. I read your new world order shit looking for some valid prose but it just sounded like you been watching too much Alex Jones you're chemically imbalanced dome is now exposed you sounded so inarticulate, your lack of prowess shows This was better, it was relevant and had a punch. Multies in the third line rolled of the tounge smoothly. it sure isn't prudent to spew conservative views in my presence surely you've heard of why the many are servin' the few it's called class, and you're reaffirmin' it through you're mindless regurgitating of fake shit you heard on fox news I read that bullshit you wrote, it was absurd as the new world order shit, besmirchin' the true left for what neo-liberals do they're as worthless as you It was alright, flowed okay but was a bit stretched in places. I didn't really see any punches though, just debating his political views. capitalist serpents that use the state to mitigate some concerns with a slew of social programs, but never truly start reversin' the plu- -tocracy cause' they serve it, and soon true socialism will emerge to subdue the primitive and submerge it under the surface of truth Again these ain't bars for a battle bro. Your just lecturing him about your own political views. It was hella stretched again too. Overall// You didn't attack your opponent enough, it felt like more of a lesson on capitalism. You have a good vocabulary and an idea of how to structure your verses but this isn't how you battle an opponent. If you stop being such a bitch you have the basis to become a really good writer. Rather than keep spamming the site with shite take some time to read the rules and learn the etiquette. Read through some past battles and see how to construct a punchline to effect. No one is hating on you for no reason, show other members you can behave in a civil way and they will treat you accordingly. ILL// iLL been fasting, you need a prayer like its Ramadan Basic as fuck, that why you left the pH off phenomenon Carry on with those fairy tales with leprechauns Trying sound smart just a dumbass with lexicon Opener was pretty dope and the wordplay worked nicely with the punchline. Second bar was average. Sprinting on every post not realizing it’s a marathon What made you think you could square dance in the octagon Only person as dope as me is in the mirror I put my product on …Your It factor is being a clown at Comicon Third bar was nice, good comedy factor. Fourth was stretched and threw me off. In fact, sit back ‘fore my pimp hand leave you bitch smacked The impact fold you in half like a dish rag Been had bars, these punches got a kickback Give this hill billy Riff Raff metal but not his tin hat Fith bar was average. Sixth was golden, best of the battle by a mile. Scriptz that goon, use caution when you speak Acting woke is just nonsense from a sheep Use your conscience, can’t be conscious if you sleep Since when did LA get Mose from The Office on a beat?! Seventh bar wasnt great, the set up wasnt the eighth wasnt the best but punchline was decent enough. You’ll get shanked right, as your golfing for the green How does iron deficiency work if you’re coughing up ya spleen? Are you as off-putting and as awkward as you seem? You’re on LA, like a celebrity stalker in the street Mocking all these artists, you’re a bother and a freak Making up for the time in school you were put in lockers as a geek This was all pretty dope and I loved the way it flowed. Can tell by the mullet, you mean business, I get it But a part in the back is a bad business decision Scripturez a legend, maybe that’s more of vision than mission But a statement that shows the difference between the finish and the finished I felt you could of come harder with the closer but it wasnt terrible. Overall// With the amount of ammo this kids given you it's hard not to take shots, some of your bars were on point and it had a good comedy factor to it. You didn't come as hard as you could but you knew you had the job done. Verdict// ILL walked this by a country mile, a more polished and experienced battler. Vote// ILL |
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Crimson Juice
Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW |
Posted: 07 October 2019 at 11:51pm |
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. OK i'm going to let Dizzle abysmal vote stand, because this battle was really a one way street here, i feel Noumenon dropped the ball, he had a wealth of ammo to use if only he dug around a little, alw- ays try to research the person you battle here, because on top of punches, personals matter too, plus Nou's verse seemed a mixer of half decent angles but poorly fleshed out concepts.. Vote... iLL....(and i'm not being bias)..peace. |
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Crimson Juice
Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW |
Posted: 07 October 2019 at 11:53pm |
And with that closed..
3-0 ko awarded to iLL.... |
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