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spume corrupt
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Posted: 19 October 2019 at 1:07am |
Concrete
You be like the sophisticated MC Always a pleasure to read your stuff Even when I know you ain’t even try properly I still enjoy Saying this was dope would definitely be a little fake curtesy... It was good though |
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Point Blank
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Yeah this was cool, smooth flow throughout and nice continuous rhyming. I could tell it was written quite quickly almost as if to shake some rust off. Would be interesting to see you write something with a little more substance and meaning rather than a self-hype/fuck you kinda verse. Still enjoyed it though
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Sammy
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hope you're doing well - pardon the fake curtesy
haha! con da gawd! This was dope man. Your flow still crisp as ever. Seems like it was coming to you mad easy bro. effortless. always a pleasure, brutha
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Mitch.Wagwaan
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That opener was sick, make a man dizzy with the multies.
Digging the "Empty Corridors of LA" line, props. Flowed nicely whole way through, the alter ego/talking to yourself bar was a nice touch. Mood swing bar was my favourite. Shit hot drop man. |
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Concrete
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Thanks Crim, good to see you still doing the good work and feeding around here. Let me know if you want some feed for a piece.
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Crimson Juice
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Loved the flow on This one, plus it was very current and relevant also, i got the
impression you've been lurking behind the scenes watching/waiting, the multi word/assonance was slick here, (like refined oil), your similies were cool too,in fact i can't find a fault to hash out or highlight, this was Ripe my man, I also liked the cold mean vibe that ran through this verse, read kind of callous to me, good to read your about Con and a real cool verse to announce your still here, i enjoyed this one got a kick from it,and signing off with adios reminded me of Snr Perfecto..lol, nice drop dude, very nice indeed....peace. Ps ppl just remember when posting in OM threads, feedback only.. |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance". |
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Concrete
Standard Member Joined: 02 September 2013 Location: Oslo Status: Offline Points: 1418 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 33-6-0 Form: WWWWWW |
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Con here on a quick visit, still sick with it slick witted to kick wicked n rip vicious LA is looking frigid, feel the heat my bars emit bringing fierce fire like an arsonist narcissist inactivety is pathological, needs straight surgery hope you're doing well - pardon the fake curtesy the scene is declining, that seems to be whining I'll fill the empty corridors of LA like a scene from The Shining and politics? your views aint refreshing let me express this I rather give a leftist left fists until all thats left is a granted deathwish saying shit is too sexist, acting all complacent while yourself is full of hatred like a racist rapist today nothing is sacred, worship Satan, it's all right and the alt right is more cancerous than Walt White -what you saying Con? seems to me youre only on a dissing spree yeah, basically I disagree with anything that isnt me fuck that misery, trickery and bickering all moody cos whenever Im brooding I find it soothing to just punch somebody - call it a mood swing yeah, at this point this verse is getting kinda stupid truly a horrid show, I guess thats how the story goes yall still glad to hear Con dropped a verse, sorry, no audios adiós!
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