Text Battle Archive: Wagwaan Vs Noumenon |
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Crimson Juice
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Posted: 23 March 2020 at 6:33pm |
Due to lack of votes, and due to the date this battle was started Mitch takes
the win for having the most votes... |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance". |
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Rapper T
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Yo this shit was a close battle it's sad to say I thought Meg Whichone would have taken this cleanly. Minomino you just rebuttaled and poorly really. Wagwaan means: 'what's goin' on' so that 'punch' of yours for instance fell wayward.
I mean Mits stuff was about other people and that Watson shit was played. Though some of the bars generically were aggressive, nothing connected heavily personally or directly which could work as an angle if you pushed it thematically which he didn't really specify so he gets like 2/10 for this from me Normie is the kid here that has copied someone's test when the person he copied got it wrong. He ain't even fight back. Let me put it like this, to call someone insecure with no punchline is weak. In short you both rhyme basic and weren't very direct here. Taking this slightly for a little more originality I gotta say Mitch took this. Peace.
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Mitch.Wagwaan
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2 days off 4 weeks since drop so thought I would up it.
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Crimson Juice
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Good tussle here fella's. Mitch Wagwaan. This drop was creative in the sense that you've included alias that have had dealings with Noumenon within your verse, you also in parts used them by doubling them up to serve as personals, which i thought was a nice touch, it seems like you had/have something to say here to Nou, each bar was direct and aimed, you wordplay was cool also, yeah i like this verse, gritty in its app- roach, there was no fucking about or subliminals, just streight at him, cool piece. Noumenon. Now to be honest i wasn't expecting you to drop a verse that is clearly leaps and bounds better than the previous one, although that wasn't to bad really, the trouble i see with your drops are as follows,firstly your over writing your bars, you need to trim back on the words, (a bar on the norm is 2 lines) ,and talking of words, this is probably one of your strengths, you seem to have a good pool of them to dip from, now your creative in this department what you need to do is to formulate them into harder and relivant punches, as i've said before leave out the gay-ish especially in battles because their nothing more than fillers or light disses at best, even when ppl are highly creative with the subject matter, it still feels out of place in a tussle, be- cause your reaching to make a punch/personal out of them, work on the punches and you'll pick up wins for sure, your word play at times gets missed i've noticed because of the jargon before and after them, you seem to have a habit of making them get lost via this process, the next thing is research, dig into your opponents posts you'll be surprised what turns up that you can then use as a punch/personals, shit look into their profiles, you'll find pictures past beefs alsorts of wonderful things to use, and always take your time when writing anything, be it a post battle verse or topical, this was a better verse thou... Overall, i see improvement in Noumenon's verse here, but i feel the more experienced battle won here, nice tussle guys, in truth i quite enjoyed this.... Vote... Mitch Wagwaan....peace. |
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Noumenon
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irony prevails quick, "Mitch don't share bitches" are you aware Mitch is defined as a "male bitch" ? fuck your frail diss, you're an embarrassment you've got nothing but arrogance, you pale in comparison it's no surprise you're shouting "what son" cause' not unlike Watson you're confounded by elementary conundrums, your fucking name is "Wagwan" for instance you couldn't calculate the quantum state of your johnson when paired with your measly two text drops, son so why you hating on Bigfoot and what are you whingin' for? in all probability, he makes you feel insecure https://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=mitch "Wagwan" is a Jamaican word for "what" and is often used to express confusion. His dick is so small, it has the properties of a quantum particle. Thus the "probability" that he is in a state of insecurity when seeing bigfoot's dick is high. Also, he has been here since 2014 and only has two text drops (which both suck btw). |
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Mitch.Wagwaan
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Year since I became a dad n again I'll leave a pussy in stitches. Ya Home Tutored Inbred Country ass beard is deformed, Claim your a lyrical genius, boy you've been ILL informed Shit ya Elementary, must be that hash ya still tweaking on. I Felt like Sherlock when ya dissed me, The way I'm Shouting What son?/Watson Rhetorical question. Are you as much of a lil bitch as it seems? Its grim son, the way you rubbed up Crimsons dick to intervene. And What's your obsession with Big foots Big Dick? Silly Git, Clearly compensating for your own prick. * 1. Beans suggested a triple threat battle. 2.Home Tutored. You seen that bum fluff on his face!?! No? Check his Anti-Conservative song. ILL Scripz called him out on his absolute dribble he calls lyrics. 3. Reference to his Wagwaan 'Diss'. Sherlock Holmes partner is Dr Watson. His catchphrase is 'Elementary'. 4. Had a bitch fit at Rhetorical and licked Crimsons ass clean on the same thread. Pussy. 5. Posted twice about Big foot including one about BF's penis. Non related but pretty sure it was his dad presenting it? |
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Mitch.Wagwaan
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5 bars, due Midnight Wednesday 9th October latest.
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