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D fluxy
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Posted: 03 January 2020 at 9:07am |
Hello... what’s up?? This is my first
Fake people fake cities Fake the way you been teartin I Been a true fake facing out fake opportunities t |
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The Law
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dope, you da best eva
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DjFlame2
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Lawrence took the words right out of my mouth.
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Crimson Juice
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To be honest, it's too short to give detailed feedback, but what I will type is, that
I thought the repeated use of the word "fake" in different settings was cool, plus it flowed well enough also, just wanted more to read really...peace. |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance". |
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