Open Mic: Fortune Teller

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    Posted: 11 March 2020 at 10:25pm
I didn't like it 
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Well it a very abstracted point of view if I've understood this right, it's
seems to come off to me as a begining and the end scenario, like it
starting out with hope and then the coming to pass, but then it also
seems to have a cycle/rebirth vibe too, that's my take anyways, I feel
you may of obscured this with to much subliminal matter, and it's for
this reason i read it twice, cool piece but too indirect for me..peace.
"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".
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Fortune teller of RA; fortune teller of fortune
Fortune teller of telling; fortune teller of sphinx
Fortune teller; scorching flames from hell
Fortune teller; scorching flames from hell
Fortune teller; onyx stone
Fortune teller; onyx sun
Fortune teller; harbored moon
Fortune teller; white moon
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