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Beborn7
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Posted: 11 March 2020 at 10:25pm |
I didn't like it
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Crimson Juice
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Well it a very abstracted point of view if I've understood this right, it's
seems to come off to me as a begining and the end scenario, like it starting out with hope and then the coming to pass, but then it also seems to have a cycle/rebirth vibe too, that's my take anyways, I feel you may of obscured this with to much subliminal matter, and it's for this reason i read it twice, cool piece but too indirect for me..peace. |
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Fortune teller of RA; fortune teller of fortune
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