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Goryo.
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Posted: 23 March 2020 at 4:38pm |
What better chance to get some creativity on the go and what better way to shake off writer's block than by rapping about rapping lol.
A pugilist specialist Quintessential technician On a mission to wreck shit With ballistic super-missiles, the weapons That I've perfected from steppin' Up out my depth, and I've tested With repetition Contested in the divisions My ubiquitous, omnipotent presence Built from consistent investment Shit every written's a lesson And every shitty regression But all the dips are a blessing It's like a blip with depression Just go commit to progression Then get up quick and impress them Sometimes this shit's an obsession... Tweaking spits with corrections To see what fits my expression Bet you could picture me stressing Like is it fresh, Am I kicking up the aggression? Perpetually we inspect it But fuck it this shit's subjective |
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Neek
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I really enjoyed the flow on this piece. usually I hate a string of suffix rhymes..but you managed to make it work. I think the small dose of vocab helped keep it from being stale. I was trying hard to imagine the beat, cause I could hear the rapid fire precision in the flow and the stress points of structure. very nice showcase piece.
welcome back Gormet |
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Crimson Juice
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Neek hit the nail well and truly square with that feed, for me i liked
for a different reason, although it was a self hype piece it had a kind of difference going for it, it had that coming of age vibe cracking off, reminded me (very loosely) of The Wonder Years on reading, it had a reflective nature, sort of a here and now seem within, it felt like you added a learning of lessons scenario that i thought worked well and kept it appealing, the word choices i liked also...enjoyable read here dude, and good to see your back in the fray again...peace. |
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Sammy
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goryo long time no see man. ha and speaking of kicking off the dust, i too like to just write about writing cause it like the easiest shit to do plus its usually fun lol.
"sometime this shits an obsession" worrrrrdddd. 100
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