Text Battle Archive: T2T Semi-final: spume corrupt vs AshleyKaos

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Bringing blades, leaving this joke with a gashed throat and open wrists
When it comes to spilling blood I’ll back/slash Kaos and soaK the bitch
You bout to know her hopeless script is fuckin shit when the votes begin
We gone see Ashley disappear from the screen like she’s an Olsen twin
Underweight, got me feeling like an arsonist the way I’m managing lighter
Corrupt handles and fires AK with more confidence than a Taliban fighter
Number 1 female Mc till you die! Kill you now cos I’m bringing the horror
Dead cunt gotta believe that ain’t some B/S that could be written tomorrow
You’re never gonna be fly! That’s the murderous news in this verbal abuse
Word 2 goose jumped out ya troupe, now Syndicates only bird is a moose
Your ugly avy the proof, no need to talk about the break up of ya crew bitch
Saw the pic and knew I couldn’t mess up ya look cos ya make up beat me to it
So I’m kicking you in the cunt a hundred times, fuck up your Fallopian tubes
Do the world a favour, make sure no one ever born as fuckin hopeless as you
Rocking you out, body slammed so hard you’ll think your living in a mosh pit
Fronting on Ash with this W so cleanly it’s like I’m giving you a wash bitch

Aiit I gotsta get a vote in on this one and on the Con/levy battle so we can hit up this final before the end of the world and there's not many other votes up in here but props to Mitch for his.

Ash, compared to your first two battles in the tourney, I reckon I read this one like it was written by someone shook versing an opponent that you were rattled about or like your verse is in a completely different style like you wasn't really in on this verse like you was in the battle against me. I real didn't like where you rhymed 'you can flow' with 'penal codes', that with no inner was real underwhelming to read as a bar, then you rhymed 'all knew that' with 'king of whack' and that was real lame. All up like while you were a bit racy with a few pretty personal concepts, it wasn't very direct or aggressive to read as a battle verse. I wanted more inner rhymes in there and more concepts and metaphors and similes, like writing techniques incorporated at a semi-final. Maybs u had to rush this verse out or something but it wasn't your best.

spume your verse was calculated at worst and raw fire at best, from backslash to the Olsens, the Talibans AK, bird is a moose, give you a wash were all noteworthy bars and stylistically your block, longstyle verse which was altogether pretty well shaped was way out of AK's league. Way more direct, personal and aggressive for me this was a pretty one-sided battle with

MVGT spume corrupt