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Groupie Joined: 09 January 2014 Location: FL Status: Offline Points: 408 Crew: eNtiTy Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-0-1 Form: NWW |
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Posted: 28 January 2021 at 2:26am |
Lake mirror a Friday night with a couple friends
A few things on my mind that I probably shouldn’t send Or put into a text just wait till I see that person and Tell em how I feel but anxiety gets the best and then it’s down hill I think I need some time to grow I need to find some hope I lost myself I know you probably know And I noticed that I can’t please the world I’ve been a lair yes, but now I cherish my girl The simple things she cooks and cleans looks at me like a king right in front of me but I was blind by a couple things And please I know I can’t afford to buy diamond rings Or something I could give to show you how much you mean to me And lately funds have been tight and I have been high Tryna smoke the pain away light it just to get by I see the insecurity’s youve been keepin inside I know it’s hard right now but our blessings come with some time I’ll roll my sleeves up and wipe the tears from your eyes let’s forget about it, I’ll pour us a glass of wine This album is a story I’m really speaking my mind care less about opinions and more about peace of mind Hold up... (I think I might fall of the cliff) This album is a story I’m really speaking my mind care less about opinions and more about peace of mind And with that being said allow me to apologize To anyone I’ve hurt with my childish mind of mine Life is just a journey see a mountain that I’ve got to climb Ups and downs twists and turns I got you that’s the bottom line But did you see how the early days were beautiful Coloring books, family trips, and music got me through Drawing pictures on foggy glass down different avenues Mornings you would take me to school and listen to the news I miss those days I can’t forget those days But how could I I miss the holidays the family’d get together for a cook out Stuff I took for granted what I loss I know I missed out I think I might fall off the cliff This album is a story I'm really speaking my mind Care less about opinions and more about peace of mind So why don't you take weight up off your shoulders Seconds, minutes, hours I told you were getting older In that little basket there's medicine that I rolled up Lets cherish little moments we have before they're over I know I got some healing to do before I'm sober But ima take a step at a time before you know it Ima bounce back work on my health I know they doubt that But thankfully I'm living for me, I used to fight that Worried bout pleasing my peers I took a step back Noticed I was losing myself, I mean.. I thought I might fall off the cliff Having Suicidal thoughts, I wouldn't make up this shit Was neglecting those around me I'm ashamed I admit But I'm working on myself, I'll find a way out this bitch I ain't asking for attention or a listen on this I'm just sharing my emotions fore' I fall off the cliff Falling off the cliff is a metaphor for dying by my own hand. I’m in a much better place now mentally. I wrote this in a darker time of my life. Any feedback is appreciate but not necessary. Just posting to build my catalog. |
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I read this and it was a pretty cool read. The flow and the structure of it is not bad. There's probably someone who could relate to a thing or two you said here and that's always a plus for pieces like this. This has some good wit. I think you have something here.
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