Text Battle Archive: [T]Joffy428 Vs Schematic[T] |
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joffy428
Groupie Joined: 11 January 2015 Status: Offline Points: 136 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-15-0 Form: LLLLWL |
Topic: [T]Joffy428 Vs Schematic[T] Posted: 19 May 2021 at 2:12am |
30 Bars 3 Votes win like U said bro good luck
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Schematic
Groupie Joined: 08 November 2014 Status: Offline Points: 130 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-0 Form: WL |
Posted: 23 May 2021 at 7:59am |
I stalk your Soul from Beyond your Grave, Death Row Bards Taking it all if you Don't Behave, Nothing or all but again you've lost cowards and Found the Brave, Leave your skull looking like a Dug out Cave When letting something burried Curse Engrave,town Depraved ghost Isometric I Treat all victims the Same, Never thinking twice when having an Imbecile Slain, Bringing the Reign ripping your vein and stripping a Brain, Striking your spirit as it leaves the body Tripling The Pain, No hopes in Diminish ing the Flame that's Eating your Frame, Blood Drips the flow slick Lick my tongue quick as it Drains, After getting Hit by the Trains, Throw you in a furnace If any Liquid Remains, That's how the Wicked Explains not Sane have you torn to Little pieces of miniature Grains With Limbs constricted, Restrained, Slowly beaten to a pulp on verge of nonexistent Domains, Force you to eat your own Lips in the Game, But it don't stop there I'm entering the site and permanently Deleting your Name, Evidently shielding in Shame trapped in a Distant Plain, I'm profane a beast unleashed to feast in any Domain, Crimes are scary nothing linking to Lame, All in pitty Grail get Peeled the Same, Make your Drink Propane and Sniff Cocaine That Eat through your core like distinguished Crane, And leave your clipped in a Lane With your throat stabbed with a piece of Pane, Like Neutral Boss Your crushed bones? I seek it Whenever it's time to Explode in secret? Secrete Bars that bash your Spleen Fast, Dropping bombs wired to Exterminate a Brutal Cast, The Sarge Mole take on thspread your flesh across Cores Break your hands and shuv em in your Asshole Then sodomize it with a Large Pole Making sure you take it all on scene like a Fat Whore, Clean Particles of your Slammed head falling form a Dam Door, Splattered all over the Stall Floor, This is pass gore... weirdly its not enough I Seldomly Want More, Switching to evil drastically wanting a Mad Choor, When it comes to Savagery You Fall Poor, I cut up a sword and have the giant parts in your Gland Stored With your chest center Holly and all Bored, So deep It wasn't a test sheep bro even a Shark Implored But in the end way inside seems a metal Shaft Explored, While your technique is so boring old a whole team going to War Snored, I'm Wrath Sold making a Path Gold Bending backs Cold or digging like a Carver in Flaw Mode it's like watching a Straw Fold, Don't try midevil tactics from the past my son Arthur I'm That Old The omen that Hold Grudges here gash your neck open Infront of Judges No need to play it discreet Swallow this bunch of poisoned roses while you roast beneath Burning Churches... |
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joffy428
Groupie Joined: 11 January 2015 Status: Offline Points: 136 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-15-0 Form: LLLLWL |
Posted: 28 May 2021 at 1:16pm |
Finally someone let him out of his cage, As Empty as his fridge and dramatic as his name his ass has been horrorcored up in A cave like a slave along with the sexy britney spears whom , oops ill tell the whole world that you smelt her farts again and again is to why your horrorcored ,cold,and stink like a bomb but thats better,your at ease while we get the schematic covid 19 disease your last verse then up in the hearse thats why its so lame so wipe your name your game and that smirk off of ur face what you rap about aint the shit u was scared live your life rap about it bail and sale your life on a BIll of Sale maybe your an example of live fast die young cause you sound like your in a horror flick sausage fest infestation. this a battle about you what u think im lost on what station about you at random cost, i dont know you all i know is your one schematic son of a bitch the horrorcore witch if it was human it would be the cannibal bitch. your like a physcho path on a wrath that never made it anywhere but to his own bloodbath when he got there he was already insane in the membrane one side was heavier than the other side of the brain like the earths moon his ass is the fullmoon Schematic the physcho only time he is calm when he watches sailor moon after that nature calls channel to watch his ancestors the babboons fight for the last of the bones, pretty savage like as i ravage you like spiderman when he fights carnage eat you up and shit you out like garbage in a bag that i throw like a flying saucer to your plate meatball sauce with all my hate because this aint no horrorcore cause i will turn shit comedy u feel me ,if you dont ill get a baseball bat let it go you flinch while "i Gotcha hat"and run like jake paul make a quick left while u hit the wall grab my baseball that i dropped to bat your security hero in the face with my ken griffey stance I aint scared ill bone crush your both your hands curb stomp ya face make you eat yourself including your weiner your butthole and your butt cheeks you beavis and butt head pest you have so much tipis in your banghole asshole schematic like a big mole you centipide come out of your own hole ill fry roast ya like a pig on a bamboo stick pole connected to your bestfriends smashholes
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JBrenn
Superior Member Joined: 03 May 2006 Status: Offline Points: 3757 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-26-0 Form: WWLWWW |
Posted: 31 August 2022 at 2:36pm |
Advice for both writers here since you both have similar flows styles structure and even rhythms.
You both are below average for the LA standard: Your flows read choppy at best. Stretched in places. try conforming to a syllable structure. Now Concepts: you both use a lot of pop culture references to "diss" your opponent but nothing personal to tie to said opponent unless you know for a fact one of you two is actually gay? Joffy your set up was a bit more structured and the whole verse wasnt just a run on.... you made a point eventually. which helps you here. S- you had bits that just dragged on and never made any real punch. Joffy gets my vote after review for more punches over all and a touch of complexity.
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Cuba
Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12329 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 29 October 2022 at 9:39am |
Under the Fixed Battle Rules a battle that is decided within 4 weeks gets closed. On that basis, since we have a vote and it's a legacy battle I am closing it as a 1-0 victory. No KO was achieved therefore regular win.
Congrats to Joffy for breaking your duck. |
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