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    Posted: 06 December 2004 at 6:10pm
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    . . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
    They just said that FUCKIN' with me
    They didn't mean it
    Nah . . .
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 December 2004 at 9:31am
    check gud luck 20
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    bad boy 4 life biggie smalls was the illest
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 December 2004 at 1:05pm
    This is the only battle I have no verses from... c'mon peeps, you only have a day and 6 hours left. 1
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 December 2004 at 1:38pm
    stay online orion ill pm u mine now
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 December 2004 at 6:27pm
    shiet.... i gotta key sumttin.... I'll pm u ...
    no more
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 December 2004 at 9:42am

    Frank White

    20th is dope ? let frank correct ya
    exposing the ''truth'' more than a lie detector
    orion knows making you a renagade was hese worst decision
    mc please your rap so weak you needed your own rap tuition
    franks punches and personals bring about 20ths destruction
    man your audios so poor raptor was embarassed to put you on renagade productions
    franks beating this pussy more than hymen rips
    your flows so poor man you lost to clipz
    20th theres no hate im just desyroying your rep for fun
    half your punches talk about a gun and yet you have never held one
    the 'truth' has never been hit the hard since watergate
    your songs are like new york city in-a-state
    since you left cfc your overatted lyrics can no longer compete
    shit jigga and shady must hate you cuz you ruined the renagde beat
    see 20th the differnce is class between us in a vast chasm
    everything you say against me is just noice like a face orgasm

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    For the Retards

    * White = Coke
    * Heza Jew, Kike = Racist Term
    * Hussle = Runnin in a Hurry, get the wordplay
    * him and Sjay are BWOIZ
    * He got Biggie Smalls in his Sig
    *We used to be Crew

    Game ... Set ... Match

    Frank come on ... when was the last time u saw real Cocaine?
    Cuz im like that White, Kike, i WILL blow ya Fuckin Brainz*
    Are u Legit? Cuz im gonna Brutally Sodomize you, da Jury called it Rape
    and he DOES hussle, when this fat fuck runs, iz da only time he 'Moves Weight'*
    I aint racist just ignorant - I'll rush ya crib and burn ya'll Bodies
    then Sjay will Pour you a lil Henny, like Drunkz atta Crazy Party*
    dont even get me Started, u aint smart, ya record makes u LOOK Retarded
    u must really TRY 2 SUCK, how do hell do u get Fifty-Four Losses???
    Why Prove myself - I Abuse Jews, they call it Religious Harrasment
    so i'll spare you the humiliation and the Muthafuckin Embarrasment
    U Need Help? Look to ya Crew -- wait scratch that -- They ALL suck Too
    I mean u HAD Scotty on Squad...wuz da leader on crack? o Yeah It Was You
    I should've known... u LOVE DickRiding, hurd Biggie's Dick was Smallz*
    Guess who told me that? yah you and Hurd He got Ashy BAllz?!?
    You fuckin' digust me, betta look to ya God with Holy Prayers
    Cuz ya Crew, Record and Audios Just Prove ya HipHop Career has Been A Failure!

    R.E.N.E.G.A.D.E.S

    . . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
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    Nah . . .
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 December 2004 at 3:27pm

    Fuckin' kids sleepin'... VOTE PLEASE... Jeezus... I'ma vote, I didn't really wanna vote on my crew's battles, 'cuz if they win, I ryde, if they lose, they get shitty w/ me... but whatever, I'ma vote.

    20th is dope ? let frank correct ya
    exposing the ''truth'' more than a lie detector
    pretty basic... but it's a cool nameplay I guess
    orion knows making you a renagade was hese worst decision
    mc please your rap so weak you needed your own rap tuition
    like the first line... nice personal... tuition line was shit tho
    franks punches and personals bring about 20ths destruction
    man your audios so poor raptor was embarassed to put you on renagade productions
    this was good... another nice personal...
    franks beating this pussy more than hymen rips
    your flows so poor man you lost to clipz
    hymen lips played... LMFAO at the loss to clipz tho, hahaha.
    20th theres no hate im just desyroying your rep for fun
    half your punches talk about a gun and yet you have never held one
    you don't know that... so im not too huge on this
    the 'truth' has never been hit the hard since watergate
    your songs are like new york city in-a-state
    watergate coo... not feelin' the second line tho
    since you left cfc your overatted lyrics can no longer compete
    shit jigga and shady must hate you cuz you ruined the renagde beat
    dope... two good punches each line... very personal harsh nature i like...
    see 20th the differnce is class between us in a vast chasm
    everything you say against me is just noice like a face orgasm
    lol... not feelin' that really

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    Frank come on ... when was the last time u saw real Cocaine?
    Cuz im like that White, Kike, i WILL blow ya Fuckin Brainz*
    eh... gotta be more imaginative if you're comin' with Jew shit...
    Are u Legit? Cuz im gonna Brutally Sodomize you, da Jury called it Rape
    and he DOES hussle, when this fat fuck runs, iz da only time he 'Moves Weight'*
    lol... simple, kinda played, but funny
    I aint racist just ignorant - I'll rush ya crib and burn ya'll Bodies
    then Sjay will Pour you a lil Henny, like Drunkz atta Crazy Party*
    not feelin' this at all...
    dont even get me Started, u aint smart, ya record makes u LOOK Retarded
    u must really TRY 2 SUCK, how do hell do u get Fifty-Four Losses???
    lol, basic but funny
    Why Prove myself - I Abuse Jews, they call it Religious Harrasment
    so i'll spare you the humiliation and the Muthafuckin Embarrasment
    ...nah man... this Jew shit is gettin' old... not feelin' it... the punchline has no punch
    U Need Help? Look to ya Crew -- wait scratch that -- They ALL suck Too
    I mean u HAD Scotty on Squad...wuz da leader on crack? o Yeah It Was You
    first line funny...second line weak...
    I should've known... u LOVE DickRiding, hurd Biggie's Dick was Smallz*
    Guess who told me that? yah you and Hurd He got Ashy BAllz?!?
    Biggie shit played... ashy balls... lmao :|
    You fuckin' digust me, betta look to ya God with Holy Prayers
    Cuz ya Crew, Record and Audios Just Prove ya HipHop Career has Been A Failure!
    pretty harsh to finish... not bad...

    No explanation really required... Frank was just better... sorry 20 bro but you rushed this... wasn't feelin' it. Frank wasn't great but he wins.

    VOTE: Frank White

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 December 2004 at 3:30pm
    Damn... what happened, 20? Those punches were very weak... Addly enough, Frank came with better punches and didn't overuse historical facts and figures. Some punches still kinda missed, but a few of them were really good. 20, the punches you threw were very weak, and some missed as well. You could've taken this comfortably, but frank did instead... Shit, I don't like doing this...
    Vote: Frank
    Insert something rappy here
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 December 2004 at 3:31pm

    Frank White
    You had a verse that I thought was a more personal thing. Flow was a lil on and off at points but you also almost never missed some type of diss against 20 in the battle and didnt talk about yourself. Very few multis which woulda helped ya flow alot and wordplay wasnt really on like that however like I said.. it was more of a personal thing to me.

    Score = 8/10
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    I could see the attempts in wordplay while you fell off on the personal level in ya verse but stuck harder with punches and wordplay than Frank I believe. Ya flow like Frank was on and off and ya multis were very scarce just as his. However I did think that you came more creatively with your verse in writing skill overall.

    Score = 8.5/10
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    Flow = Tie (Thought you both were on and off at points when read)
    Multiz = Tie (Very scarce from the both of you)
    Punchez = 20
    Wordplay = 20
    Personals = Frank (He got on ya audios and just kept it more personal overall)

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    "everything you say against me is just noise like a fake orgasm"- Frank

    Well.. out of everything.. looks as though it's a tie so imma just have to go on Overall Enjoyment to read and I think my vote is gonna go to...
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    After all that I thought, I think 20 just came more consistently than Frank and in a more creative way when it comes to writing in this battle which gave him the upper hand and my vote although it was hard for me to decide.

    Vote = 20

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 December 2004 at 4:06pm

    Frank - Flow Was kinda choppy, and some punches/personals werent very nice... some were though... i liked the verse, one of yo' best... [dont get big headed your not that good]... but yeh, i think you really need to work on your multis & ending rhymes.

    20 - Tryed to come complex... but didnt pull it off tha well... ive seen better... some personals were nice... but most'a yo punches were played out... alot of personals missed too... so ima give it to

    Vote - Frank...



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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 December 2004 at 4:08pm

    Frank White wins 3-1 and progresses to the next round

    . . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
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