Open Mic: the RETURN

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    Posted: 21 March 2005 at 9:39am

nigga i hadda come back 2 set shit straight//

nigga im on mixtapes its a piece of cake//

how i get on uk radio and i live in ny//

i guess this means da world is mine//

and imma take it//

mite as well put da world in my hands n shake it//

cuz my rhymes will have u shakin straight up scared//

ull have 2 run home get a new pair of underwear//

so im back but only fa a short time//

so yall niggas betta come quick if u wanna make a battle rhyme//

yea i did my time//

now yall can call me da cheif//

ill have yall niggas hangin on my words like my words da branch and u da dyin leaf//

u can ask niggas when i come back i always make a show//

jus like when i go 2 ya girl crib//

she always on her knees READY TA BLOW//



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Sup... double










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welcome back, I guess...

still no improvement in content.. try again. See you in 4 months.
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Cuttin P Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 March 2005 at 12:42pm

oooooh that's mean as hell Jehu.... lmao.

 

BUTTTT.... I'd have to agree... you should do some experimenting with various styles... you'll get it someone... as long as you always aim to be better that is...

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nope... no change in over a year (as far as I've seen)
Cause old LL, Q-tip and pharoah, are the only nice ones in queens
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that was abit simple rhyming man, you should elevate more, but don't worry everyone was like that, even me , and it sucked .lol but elevate man, keep it going, if jehu is saying you were like that 4 months ago then you really going slow with rapping. but elevate man, you'll get better, believe me
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