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DOUBLE
Standard Member Joined: 27 October 2003 Status: Offline Points: 153 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-3-0 Form: LLL |
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Posted: 21 March 2005 at 9:39am |
nigga i hadda come back 2 set shit straight// nigga im on mixtapes its a piece of cake// how i get on uk radio and i live in ny// i guess this means da world is mine// and imma take it// mite as well put da world in my hands n shake it// cuz my rhymes will have u shakin straight up scared// ull have 2 run home get a new pair of underwear// so im back but only fa a short time// so yall niggas betta come quick if u wanna make a battle rhyme// yea i did my time// now yall can call me da cheif// ill have yall niggas hangin on my words like my words da branch and u da dyin leaf// u can ask niggas when i come back i always make a show// jus like when i go 2 ya girl crib// she always on her knees READY TA BLOW// Edited by DOUBLE |
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ILLSTARRR
Veteran LA CHAMP aka Da General Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: P-Town... HBC Status: Offline Points: 3934 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #2 Stats: 47-6-2 Form: WLWNLW |
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Sup... double
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www.myspace.com/illsta |
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King Jehu
Veteran Joined: 23 January 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6088 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #4 Stats: 54-18-1 Form: WLWWWL |
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welcome back, I guess...
still no improvement in content.. try again. See you in 4 months. |
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Insert something rappy here
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Cuttin P
Standard Member Joined: 04 January 2005 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 320 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-2-0 Form: LL |
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oooooh that's mean as hell Jehu.... lmao.
BUTTTT.... I'd have to agree... you should do some experimenting with various styles... you'll get it someone... as long as you always aim to be better that is... |
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King Jehu
Veteran Joined: 23 January 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6088 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #4 Stats: 54-18-1 Form: WLWWWL |
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nope... no change in over a year (as far as I've seen)
Cause old LL, Q-tip and pharoah, are the only nice ones in queens |
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Insert something rappy here
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Ryder
Standard Member Joined: 06 December 2004 Location: South Africa Status: Offline Points: 575 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-6-0 Form: LWLWWL |
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that was abit simple rhyming man, you should elevate more, but don't worry everyone was like that, even me , and it sucked .lol but elevate man, keep it going, if jehu is saying you were like that 4 months ago then you really going slow with rapping. but elevate man, you'll get better, believe me
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