Open Mic: Depths Of My Mind`-Part 2....peep...

finished version of my previous drop....Feed Greatly Appreciated

streets paved with grime,we all slaves in this time
erase yo brain or raise your game to the line
kids is cravin the nines, images saved in their mind
of rappers claimin to be blazin on pages of rhymes
got dreams of paradise,and visions of wealth
make decisions or yo livin will diminish yo health
but im finished wit the image that my business is dealt
these mcs is faker than them spinners on belts
the game brought it to me, thought it would see
we jus want the paper but get caught up in beef
so we slaughter yo peeps,we aborted to creep,
resort to retreat or get forced to defeat
got black sores-on-our feet from runnin chores for the streets
get your heart torn from the core,im distortin the weak
exploring these beats,my vocals implore to complete
in the depths of my mind I find rhymes stored to release

rappers stay smart,never pay homage to bling
the power of thought to the lyrical college i bring
no stressin,learn the lesson,that 'Knowledge is King'

A Mind is a terrible thing to waste,so i keep mine active
with philosophy or thoughts-of-green,deep rhyme tactics
thats how i beat lines backwards and defeat lyin actors
focus on my hustle,cus on the street,crime matters
but i wont cease nine blasters, i'll speak mind factors
deep thought we keep short,but i'll release in time,mastered
travel to places never seen,even in better dreams
laced with genius meanins,each and every letter gleams
no matter how temptin cheddar seems,i'll spit with clever means
cus fuck club music,fake thugs use it to get in bed-wit-teens
but i stay true,i'd stray from gun talk to school kids
change minds of bullied youngsters hurt with bruised ribs
cus when they shoot up schools its rappers whos accused,pigs
maybe is true,we do use guns in every two spits
gangster images is the way top charters fuse hits
choose to never lose,no matter how bad my moves did
hope london streets respect me the way N.Y used Big

mc's stay smart,never pay homage to bling
the power of thought to the lyrical college i bring
no stressin,learn the lesson,that 'Knowledge is King'

yeah audio eventually, gotta work/lengthen the hook first..thanks for feed

uppin

Yeah, Liked this

Structure was nice, flow was tight, vocab shown the good from the bad

Nice

Flow was real solid..and ultis were smooth..i esp. liked the 2nd verse..oit was pretty much flawless...good to see some good talent on this site...i'm impressed..hit me up for a collab mayne...

nice spit.