Text Battle Archive: Championship Battle Frank vs Illa

10 lines for the text championship of LA

Illa’s like a disfunctional general cause he dont hold no rank
only retained ya title ‘cause you no- showed on point blank
bitch bound to bring with some shitty punch about me and sjay
but im wondering who’s writing your verses now your mums away
this bloke couldent be a ill star if he was fucking paul merson
i heard ya neek diss, thought you and benni were the same person
you gone and lost all ya dickriders how the fuck you gonna harm me
man your like Liechtenstein cause you went and lost ya army
someone call demonic or hanging, this battle needs closure
cuz the only "show down" illas doing is for indecent exposure

I'ma just do this bar by bar plain an simple... u both know me an u both know I'm critical so please save me the shit...

Illa’s like a disfunctional general cause he dont hold no rank
only retained ya title ‘cause you no- showed on point blank
Blank idea is good but not worked well... you did a punch each line there, not feelin it
bitch bound to bring with some shitty punch about me and sjay
but im wondering who’s writing your verses now your mums away
Again a good idea on usin his mother shit, but to flip it like she writes his verses... that's not a funny joke to me, good pre-emptive strike wit the SJay shit tho
this bloke couldent be a ill star if he was fucking paul merson
i heard ya neek diss, thought you and benni were the same person
Paul Merson lmao... you and Benni same person... that's aight but it's not very hard, in such a short-ass battle everything needs to be hard, that would be good in an unlimited lines or longer battle, sure
you gone and lost all ya dickriders how the fuck you gonna harm me
man your like Liechtenstein cause you went and lost ya army
Haha, it's good but u shoulda personally referenced it more, like people been leaving Front Line n shit, n some are inactive, flip it like that, get him involved, don't just use similes constantly
someone call demonic or hanging, this battle needs closure
cuz the only "show down" illas doing is for indecent exposure
lol, kinda witty, not bad

Overall... I told you when u showed me this I didn't like it, for such a short battle it didn't have killer material at all... but looks like my advice was unheeded 'cuz this is the exact same spit... coulda done much better, and the title vs ILLA? SHOULDA done much better...

Bitch.. Im ur leader but this is physical orders*
Frank aint crossin' the General.. Like political borders
You shoulda flipped the hold no rank shit a lot harder and more relevantly... shoulda made it ya punch line, political borders shit is ok tho
Man, I jacked ur "crack".. dawg im killin' ya "jab"
U kno ur wack, when all u EVERsay is " Wanna collab?"*
lmfao... this was killer... just a funny line
Ya Hoe.. Countin' all ya losses would take a day
Frank so far down the "table", He has to eat takeaway (ha ha)
lol, not bad concept
Ur bitter... cus ya moms had u cut down south (oops)*
Plus U already been "Chin-checked" for runnin' ya mouth*
Ha... two nice personals in one... none of it worded real hard tho
U nothing to fear, U got a child like temper
U been here over a year, An u just a 'Superior Member' (clown)*
That shit's good... lol... everyone else who's been here consistently for a year's been made vet... except of course Nox who got made vet then got it taken away lmao, good personal

Overall... you didn't try but you didn't need to, Frank didn't push u at all which is a real shame... I think you used what you did have in a funnier and more relevant and personal way... you had more effective wordplay, simple sure, but who gives a fuck, if it works it works, and it did... You out-flowed and rhymed ya opponent easy

Shit's no contest really... and a 10-line title battle is gay anyway... Frank u really shoulda brought your A-game to this

VOTE: ILLA

Orion is retarded... why the need for long detailed votes? I vote illa cause he had better punchlines and frank fell flat on this... Illa flipped well and shit.


TO ANYONE WHO ASKS WHAT ORION AND I THINK OFA VERSE:

If you show us a verse and we say it'snot very good/you won't win/it's weak, etc.... and your lazy ass changes NOTHING and post it, don't exect to win...

Illa got a win without trying much, but good shit anyway.




Vote: Illstarrr

^^ yep ...

Frank .. always the same cuzz. really ya should go checc some tutorials.

Illa . nice verse. won this easily

ILLA got my  vote.

 

^^ acctually nearly two years 

illa wins 3ko