Text Battle Archive: Title: -Orion- vs ILLA (round 4) |
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-Orion-
Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
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Posted: 20 October 2005 at 7:45pm |
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Default rules... match my bars FYI Don'tchu know?! Beginning of the End... no mercy, this shit is over Robbin' this bitch to demolish him quick Now I wanna see Belair, X-Ray, Louie and whoever else come out the woodwork and vote for you, then disappear again... Title or not I don't care... you decide and state when you respond with a verse... whenever that is Renegades... |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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ILLSTARRR
Veteran LA CHAMP aka Da General Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: P-Town... HBC Status: Offline Points: 3934 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #2 Stats: 47-6-2 Form: WLWNLW |
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I told u he was mo' gaye than Marvin The Dynasty... Vote up
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NepentheZ
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Im only going to break down the Four main catagories! Ill Start With Orion .... Punches. Punches were Tight, espesially the way there were incorporated with personals. like Illa Said .. the soda can punch was a bit weak/played whut ever you wanna say. the concept has been used a million times before. other than that they were very original, and hard hitting. 9/10 Personals. ok, so .. i regularly speak to the both of you on MSN .. and while you have these personals backed up .. illa assures me there fake. but .. as i only judge whut i read, not whut im told. ill take them as real. in that case .. the personals floored illa. the cleopatra bar was just too sick. the concept and wording of the bar was none other than great. personals really hit illa very hard. 10/10 Flow. flow was on point. i dont think i once had to look back over a few bars because of the flow. nice multis made it a very easy read. 10/10 Multis ... as i said in flow .. multis were good. not really great as many times they were very basic syllabuls that you were rhyming. but still gave the verse another dimension. 8/10 Illa .... Punches. Punches were good quite hard hittin, some good flips, i especially liked the Soda Flip .. found that quite hilarious! ... ya punch personal combination was nice at times .. came off really effective. but then at others .. came off a little weak. 8/10 Personals. Dope personals. even tho they totally contradict all of orions personals!. they were incorporated well with punches, like with O .. i accept whut i read .. so i take the personals as they are! good shit. 10/10 Flow. i didnt really feel any of the flow here. single sylabul rhymes were only average. didnt flow awful. but it flowed average. some of the vocab may have been the trouble. 8/10 Multis ..... mutlis were, well ... not really there! .. as i said in flow .. single syllabul multis .. or very very generic multis in some of the verse. no offense at all ... but this is the sort of thing i would expect from frank! the verse seemed very rushed to me.. and that was affected here. 7/10 Orion. 37/40 Illa. 33/40 Footnotes : orion took this battle .. mainly because of the four main element were all bound together in a really good way. i was a little disappointed by illas verse, especially as he was going second. he really should have made the most of that. his verse just wasnt as fullfilling as orions. Orion G-NEPS-V |
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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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Cuba
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1-0 Orion, for now |
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ILLSTARRR
Veteran LA CHAMP aka Da General Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: P-Town... HBC Status: Offline Points: 3934 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #2 Stats: 47-6-2 Form: WLWNLW |
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Slept on..
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Point Blank
Superior Member Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN |
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I Aint Actually In My House Right Now...And I Dont Know When I Will Be,
But This Is Too Long To Vote On Right Now, So Ill Vote When I Get Back
Home.
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Point Blank
Superior Member Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN |
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Fuck It Ima Vote Now Anyway Got Nothing Else To Do.This Was One Hot Ass
Battle, Definitily Worthy Of A Title Match.If It Was Upto Me Id Give
You Both A Title, But Ill Try And Explain My Best.Startin With O, It
Was The Usual Shit For You.Flowed Perfectly, I Like The Way You Do A
Line Very Short If Your About To Make A Long One After It, Eg The Shit
Bout An Opponents Pussy Lol.Personals Were Everywhere, Some Of Them I
Wouldnt Quite Understand Multies Were Nice, Not Hard To Follow And Made
The Verse Easy To Read And Flow Through.Punches Were Hot As Per Usual,
You Had Me Lost In This Mark Anthony Shit, But I Read The Explanation
And Then I Kinda Understood It, Even Though I Havent Seen Cleopatra And
Havent Got A Fuckin Clue Who Mark Anthony Is Lol.First Two Punches
Where Murderous, LMFAO @ The Curries Punch Hahaha.It Was Kinda Layed
Out Like An Audio, Which Questions And Little Comments Here N There In
Brackets.At The Start You Said 'I'll waste time to get proof if you
doubt shit' Well I Wanna Know Who Admitted To Rydin Him And Admitted To
Voting Wrong, Coz That Cudda Been Made Up For All We Know.Moving Onto
Illa, This Rolled Off The Tongue Nicely.Rhyming Was Basic But Very
Effective In My Opinion.Now I Dont Really Like Verses Which Feed Off
Other Peoples Verse, But I Gotta Admit The Punches Were Hot, Even If
They Were Flipped From O's, Specially The Ones About His Soda Line And
Jehus Gay Marriage Thread!
Overall Its Prolly The Hottest Battle Ive Witnessed Since Being Here, Mad Props To Both Emcees, But I Think O Just Edged This, His Verse Was More Original And Had Harder Hitting Punches In My Opinion O GMV No Hate, My Bad If It Werent Explained Well Enough, Just Get At Me On MSN And I Will Explain More If You Want. Peace |
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ILLSTARRR
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Least Now the ILLA's ryder shit can go out the window lol.... If i got ryders where are they now? 2-0 Orion |
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-Orion-
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In ya crew, or the ones I called out in my post... lmao jp PB: Louie admitted that he "would back him even if he did wrong" <--- how much clearer do u need it...not that I even have anything against Louie... And Nox admitted he voted wrong in the audio tournament finals...not that I have anythin' against Nox either... I do indeed have tha chats of those somewhere on this computer but if u actually expect me to go find them I will have to slap u, but end of the day I will do it as I don't want anyone to think it's bullshit |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Neek
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this was a hot battle, props to both.
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#Bananas
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
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you makin it out like nox did a blatent dickride in the conv i had with calypso, he said his vote was fair when he posted it, but when it listened back later on he changed his mind though he could of just been sayin that so he didnt get in trouble an quit swayin - back to votes i'll try my best to monitor 'return votes' but in all fairness ya picked a shitty time to battle - cose the sites dead so you could claim ANY vote is a 'return vote' due to the recent inactivity |
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-Orion-
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Quit swayin'? He asked me a question? Did u even read his vote? He said can u please explain to me? So I did? And na, I didn't name Nox as the dickryder, so I'm not makin' out he did a dickryde, again I urge you to read what I just said... I said Louie was the "rydin'" reference and Nox was the "vote wrong" one... so yea, he admitted he didn't believe in his vote when I talked to him, which was on the same day he dropped it... for real maybe his mind did change RIGHT AFTER I don't know, either way when I spoke to him he said he didn't think the vote was right... so that's what I base it on... All I say in the punch is he admitted he voted incorrectly... which is exactly what he did when talkin' to me... lol it's funny you say I'M swaying... you tryna dissect that punch (and failing) is blatant swaying, I didn't sway anything, I answered his damn question I can guarantee if ILLA had said somethin you wouldn't have quoted his post and put "FILLA or The Mighty FILLA" or some other amusin thing, yet with me u choose to try an' be patronising about shit... Sure, u aren't biased, not at all Return votes?! I haven't voted on a Point or Nep battle for as long as I can remember I'm sure ILLA doesn't want u buttin' in his battle talkin' shit... The reason he gets punches thrown at him about this sorta Scotty rydes u shit is 'cuz u come in doin' shit like this... We (me an ILLA) both talked straight after we dropped and we both said hot battle well done good shit etc etc... Now I'm assumin' he meant it when he said it, 'cuz I sure did... so what I'm tryna say is, why get in the way? You could argue u were doin' ya admin duties, but u really weren't, 'cuz as I have just displayed, u were hugely innaccurate in accusations regardin' swayin', twistin of facts and return votes, kindly apologise Thanks |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
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i wasnt talkin bout a punch or vote swayin or shit
just merly sayin wot calypso said to me
i always call you onion - just like i call noxious calypso others call king jehu "jewho" and other people have nicknames too just happens i dont have one for illa - though if i did, id wanna think up my own rather than filla umm i'll try an think of one for illa
sorry i ment return votes as in returning to the site after ages and voting not voting for you to return the favour - and i never ment to imply that
yay am like my hero.... maybe i'll begin to gain your skill too orion all am apologisin for is the 'Return Votes' comment - as that was misunderstood - the vote swayin wasnt ment to be part of it so i aint botherin wit that and besides - who listens to me anyway *glances over at Shadow Boxin - turns away in discuste* |
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ArKane
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this battle was aight, nothin special from either... both could have done alot better IMO....
orion: you had a nice flow... would sound nice on audio.. but then again, this is text, therefore i still think that punches are the most important thing in a text battle... flow jus helps a little... so, my advice would be to focus on your punches first and your flow second... becuz it sems like you have a nice flow, but your punches seemed to slack a little.. the personals made up for them though, had some nice personals... illa: the opposite of orion, lol.. your flow was alright, didnt feel it very well, but, ill say it again, flow doesnt matter as much in text battles... punches do.. and, you had harder hitting punhces... you had a couple personals, not much, but the few you had were nice also... final decision: it basically came down to a good overall verse vs. a good battle verse... orion's being the good overall verse.. illa's verse was a better battle verse though... so... vote = illa |
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hanGing
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2-1 then.
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Cuba
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Nice choice of pic Point
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Point Blank
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Lol Thank You
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Scotty32
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Arkanes vote is disallowed
and the battle is no longer for the Title as its already on the line else where 2-0 to orion Edited by Scotty_32 |
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Cuba
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If you are talkin about the Unforgiven battle then technically that battle isnt for the title...it was gona be but mine and Illas battle was up so it couldnt be when it was set, so they cancelled it...i dont think you can say "its not for the title, oh wait yeh it is"...its like me settin a battle up with point blank, then i win the title off illa then point sayin "oh this battle is for the title", fuck that, plus everyone knows this is a battle that should decide the title anyway...its like 1-0 Orion, could go either way, i havent made my mind up yet so I havent voted, but if its due to the Unforgiven battle i think thats wrong |
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ILLSTARRR
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It is for the title.. As far as im concerned
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