Text Battle Archive: Zikki vs NepentheZ

now you facing the Grim~Reaper, sit n enjoy that, your last Thin~Reefer,
wearing spandex you Gym~Teacher, now your playing wid Sins~Preacher,
sharp as a knife im a Skin~Breacher, bet u chinease n got all Jins~features,
canabalistic, i'll begin~2~eat-ya, handle balastics, my glock will great ya,
when i make Nepen the Z ends, Z.I wid his Double K, I decends, Comprehend ?!?
contending like you, an armless boxer, style's got no drive, like u in a Vauxhal,
the only rapper who shouts "cops~rule", theres a list and your the top~fool,
comparable to a christian you think dat gods~kool, but he's already forgot~you,
ur only blessing was acceptance into pop~school, given a noose n I'll knot~pull,
drop~all the false sherades, r u a movie, book, song, gay pantomime or play,?







 

Zikki... multies may sound nice but do not hurt your opponent...  Long line structures did not negatively affect the flow... but some lines contained two separate diss-concepts which could have been used more directly and effectively as individual punchlines without lyrical flamboyance...  Hard punches and personals were also lacking...

NepentheZ... nice rhymes... apart from the last line...  Punches were ok but linguistically flawed and should have come stronger...  "Point Of You" wordplay was irrelevant and did not need to be changed from "Point Of View"...  I expected to see more personals between crew-Members...

Vote: NepentheZ...

Adios...