Open Mic: The Lost Scrolls

it'z the Lost Soul, Breeze

with the lost scrolls i freeze, facin obsticles

with the damage of opticals

i see the light, God'z at the end

i defend, the scrolls like a friend

with rhythm im given, it'z like a gift

keepin up my guard with my fists

mic genius

the meanest u'll see

Breeze with elements of Thai Chi

knowin the game of death like Bruce Lee

this is justice

MC Hammer, u can't touch this

infectin the minds of these kids

i stand over the tomb of Tutankamun in the pyramids

i snatch souls

and defend the Lost Scrolls

tbh honest this was pretty weak. i thought, by the title it woulda been a story length topical, with deep shit, historic, classic. but turns out it was nothin' to do really wit' lost scrolls, an' MC Hammer line, dude for real. Thats scrapin' the barrell. Just a thought, while writin' this, through out, you actually talk about "Defendin' the scrolls" ... how can you so this when the title clearly indicates that they are lost, shouldnt it be a piece about searchin for them? yea, not really enjoyin' this one, coulda been worked much much better.