Open Mic: Silent Tradition

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    Posted: 30 October 2006 at 8:23pm

I posted this in the S4R so check it out judges...

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Have you ever been in a position where the walls of life start to thicken
And you start thinking that you're slipping and your mind is drifting
Dripping tears instead of cheers, your fears become your inhibition
Stress starts to pile up, meanwhile you're stuck, put out of commission
In addition there is friction with your friends and opposition
Wishing they understood you and knew your medical condition
But they don't, you lose hope, after you made a formal requisition
Nobody listened, now your soul mysteriously disappears like a magician
This is the definition of a kid who seeks guns and ammunition
Comes to schools to shoot students, teachers, and former politicians
Forced into submission, thinks demolition is the only form of volition
Witness acts of violent surprises as we don't react to all of this abolition
It's the system, a scary apparition that haunts and taunts our visions
Apparently our own omissions set forth are distorting life's exhibition
And still were sitting, doing nothing, not addressing certain propositions
To help those who know they need to grow thru their own contrition
So make it a mission to reach out and listen to a learning cognition
An expedition of a composition to prevent kids from turning into morticians
Once this is finished there should be no more acts of rendition thru sedition
Breaking the munitions of silence will help construe a new view of tradition.

I Fuckin Suck
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nasty, good job.Clap
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