Audio Mic: New audio- "Give me a pen"
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    Posted: 22 February 2007 at 10:10am
Getting back to recording after a bit of a break....this the kinda song a lotta emcees can relate to..check it out...and drop yer links if u want feedback on ur audios...it's the track on top.....
 


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dope beat, and the flow is dope too, feeling this, ot that just blaze feel to it, shame your voice couldn't be recorded any louder...the third verse is crack

 
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Form: WWNWWN 		Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Point Blank Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 February 2007 at 11:37am
Nice Yo...Pretty Good Beat, Verses Were Nice, Lyrically Too....VENOMOUS BITCHES..Booyah...BRAP!!
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i dunno why these dudes are gassin you up...

this wasnt very good... you had a creative flow... but it wasnt consistant... it was choppy... and i cant understand what the fuck you were saying much of the time .. it sounds like you got ya fingers pinchin ya nose... i didnt like how you repeated lines all the time either ... the hook got annoying fast...

it seriously sounds like you got ya fingers stuck up ya nose and you got a cold...

sorry to say... but you dont have the voice for rap... people have to be able to stand hearing your voice for 3 minutes or more... and i couldnt
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haha no prob man...constructive criticism is always welcome....as for my voice there is little i can do about it...but i'm one of the first to admit that my enunciation needs serious work...hopefully i can do better in my next track...keep the feedback coming....


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Form: WLLNWN 		Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote ProFound Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 February 2007 at 6:28am
Originally posted by a-list a-list wrote:

haha no prob man...constructive criticism is always welcome....as for my voice there is little i can do about it...but i'm one of the first to admit that my enunciation needs serious work...hopefully i can do better in my next track...keep the feedback coming....
 
 
And that there folks..... is how you take critism... not whine like a bitch.
 
Also, there is things you can do... I change my voice a bit when I rap. Just try speaking clearer.. putting a strain on voice ect. ( hard to explain what I do )  Try out differnt things.. pick the thing that works best for you. Even if it meens slowing down.
 
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iight man...i'ma try and switch it up a bit..once again g'd looks on the feedback..


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Form: LLL 		Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote njZillesT Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 March 2007 at 8:24pm
not bad just fix your voice......
add reverb and eq... lol
 
your voice is so DRY
 
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