Open Mic: Third Degree

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   A lil' sample of the lyrics of my next audio....

They inflict third degree torture with third degree burns,
But what that can scorch ya is the words that we learn,
It could be a curse or me freeing the shine,
Or maybe this is just the third degree of the mind,
There's three degrees just like three verses,
Never get free of these,now as this emcee curses,
We all gon' see hearses,that's after the level of three,
This is a fight,it's me versus what is the devil in me,
The endeavour's to see what we never can free,
But severed from me,I now see the levels of three,
The first level, we be in our childhood and our youth,
What you might do in the booth with the mic,spewing the truth,
And once you through with the youth,middle age will settle down,
The riddle plays your mettle down,little fazed,you off the pedal now,
Gotta drop the kettle down after the three whistles of smoke,
Old age,the last whistle of hope,when just to piss you get choked,
Then to exist is a joke, no one survives the third degree,
When it hurts to breathe, you can't reverse the sea,
Or bring back the tide,it's just a matter of time,
Before you gasp and die,lying flat on your spine.

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a-list Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 09 July 2005 Location: India Status: Offline Points: 28	Post Options Post Reply Quote a-list Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Third Degree Posted: 23 February 2007 at 12:23pm
	A lil' sample of the lyrics of my next audio.... They inflict third degree torture with third degree burns, But what that can scorch ya is the words that we learn, It could be a curse or me freeing the shine, Or maybe this is just the third degree of the mind, There's three degrees just like three verses, Never get free of these,now as this emcee curses, We all gon' see hearses,that's after the level of three, This is a fight,it's me versus what is the devil in me, The endeavour's to see what we never can free, But severed from me,I now see the levels of three, The first level, we be in our childhood and our youth, What you might do in the booth with the mic,spewing the truth, And once you through with the youth,middle age will settle down, The riddle plays your mettle down,little fazed,you off the pedal now, Gotta drop the kettle down after the three whistles of smoke, Old age,the last whistle of hope,when just to piss you get choked, Then to exist is a joke, no one survives the third degree, When it hurts to breathe, you can't reverse the sea, Or bring back the tide,it's just a matter of time, Before you gasp and die,lying flat on your spine.


..Ghost.. Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 11 December 2006 Location: The Land Where Dragons Rule... Status: Offline Points: 379 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-3-1 Form: WLWWWN	Post Options Post Reply Quote ..Ghost.. Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 23 February 2007 at 12:35pm
	flow is smooth, some stuff didnt make much sense to me .. We all gon' see hearses,that's after the level of three, This is a fight,it's me versus what is the devil in me, ^^ thats decent... not bad, prolly a lil better on audio...stay up edit, forgot to add...liked the last 2 bars... Edited by ..Ghost.. - 23 February 2007 at 12:36pm


Point Blank Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN	Post Options Post Reply Quote Point Blank Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 23 February 2007 at 12:39pm
	Nice Flow That Can Do Good On Audio. Had A Good Vibe About This, Some Shit I Didnt Get Either, Tho You Can Probly Explain It On MSN If I Ask Also Had A Nice Rhymescheme To It. Stay Up

a-list Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 09 July 2005 Location: India Status: Offline Points: 28	Post Options Post Reply Quote a-list Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 25 February 2007 at 4:51am
	g'd looks yall...