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G-Pfeif
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Posted: 05 December 2007 at 11:55pm |
Found this beat by VTZ... shits ill... its a sample of Mike Tyson Punch Out
So i wrote this... this is verse one.. two more to come...
ENJOY!
I been illa than most wit deals, it’s a wonder I aint get any yet
When I punch out competition, like im playin on the on the N-E-S
I consider myself like lil mac... but don’t think that im little, mack...
you aint hot as me, don’t gimme that… you get yo chin cracked,
blood drippin like my lyrics, comin steady wit a fast flow
facin me you the first to fall… gettin knocked out, you glass, Joe
ya lookin like an asshole, cuz you just wasn’t tough enough
I know the game, im in control…you hit start, you’ll get an uppercut
My punches couldnt be harder even if hatten packed it
plus im way past ya style, Im kinda like satin jackets
My rappin tactics blast hatas with only a stanza
No need to ask "whos the boss?" I aint no Tony Danza
I spit hot, flow hard, kinda like Mayweather
While you chumps are soft & mild, u kinda like May's weather
No question, Im way better. Im heavy, your weight's feather
Pfeif's a head of you, you after me, I'll call you the 8th letter
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Fatal
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Daaaaaamn punchout is dopest game ever for nintendo...damn, memories... Tight verse G...lmao @ the closer...lookin forward to the other verses.... |
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dalinquent
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was pretty good...some nice lines and what not...still wondering how your gonna delivery that over the beat without mubbling words...
MSNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN Edited by dalinquent - 06 December 2007 at 12:14am |
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Fatal
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^I was thinkin the same...i couldnt picture spittin over that beat
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Freeda5thDawg
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i sure cudnt spit on it...but i mean, maybe da flow is arranged in a certain way from ur standpoint...but it was a pretty good piece overall...
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