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    Posted: 13 January 2008 at 1:09am
jus a key, off the dome..
 
she said- i lik it hard n ruff,
tie me to the bed, use the cuffs,
dnt be gentle, make it hurt,
make it hott, tare my skirt,
palm my tits, n rock wit this,
"i hope u know i get off to this,
so dnt be goin to soft to quick",
n she said- dnt stop, ohh SHIIIT,
smell the innocences between'er lips,
the tyteness is rightious between'er hips,
so im pushin in, she scratch my back.
the snatch attack, ....
chokin my chicken til it collapse, infact,
i wnt lie, i busted lik the quickest ever,
thinkin of my gurl, but this bitch is better,
but all'a sudden- it turn to a sick dream,
shes lik, i love you- an im only 15,...
"WAT BITCH??", how was i suppose to know,..
shes under-age, c'ya.. i gotta go...
 
lol, jus sum shit.. bored as fuck..
..Sin, The Boi Unforgiven..
..Im A Lethal Weapon On Mics Lik'a Mel Gibson Interview..
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Hybrid. Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 January 2008 at 5:25am
this was really basic not that much of a topic just seems like a fuck around piece..ehh upgrade your whole game bruv.
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it was a fuck around verse.. haha
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote iCeZ Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 January 2008 at 3:35am
end was poor man... but flow throught out was prtty good.
Ice they need time to translate it, That why U let kids down
So ya'll should go read my 08 shit, maybe U'll get it now
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agree, thought it was hella poor
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