Open Mic: Prisoner

Hypnotiq~words~distort ya optiks...minds of divine prisoners lost in toungs of toxic//((1)) four walls trapped in to strengthen destruction....mislead thoughts, with irrelevant~evidence remain in police investigations//((2))

resenting pasts~and~present fearing life long mistakes....sayin they sorry for~enslavement but to keep you locked down do whateva it takes//((3)) my mind is threatened cuz through my dreams i see the writing on the wall.....intellegence~replaced wit evil intentions definin the fall//((4))

call me crazy~say im going through fazes.....whether guilty or innocent prisoners is going through changes//((5)) Gay~men Straight men they all gods men....lost to a world leavin them no choice no way to repent//((6))

fifty fifty chance he gonna do life....sickening~got me thinkin cuz that was his look alike(wrong guy)//((7)) interagation pressin ya face on the floor....you have the right to remain silent do they even mean that shyt anymore?//((8))

trippin me out cuz you have the right to an attorney....niccaz that screw wit ya mind implant lies and steal ya money//((9)) anything i say will be held against me.....searching my shyt nicca do you really have a reason to arrest me?//((10))

black man wrong time.... read my rights? dont keep repeatin them lines//((11)) cuz a prisoners a prisoner wether ya lawyer him or not...you think im guilty when am innocent so im going to jail wether i like it or not//((12))

This was just a freestyle....guess everything i drop is a freestyle iunless i say other but give feedback this a serious topic na mean

Nice flow and imagery on a serious topic... except for line 11...

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