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GraphicKontent
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Posted: 01 April 2008 at 10:31pm |
Now My Temptations-Merking-The-Guys, But I Feel A Sensation-Burning-Inside.. I Must Be Compensated-During-The-Rhymes, I Concentrate-&-Yearn-To-Provide.. Now I Give A Tenacious-Serving-Of-Lines Forming The Most-Musical-Messages.. To All Of Those-Beautiful-Presences, Stepping Will Get Yu Thrown-Funeral-Presages.. Degrading-The-Losers, While Manipulating-The-Future..Taking-Heed-To-Change-Prophecies.. Cuz These Fake-Emcees-Are-Made-Awfully, While I Continue Making-Speech-In-Phraseology.. Dont Get It, Leaving Out The People In The Background Wen The Setting-Is-The-Part-Of-The-Stage.. Im Reminiscing, Getting-In-The-Heart-&-Enraged..Now Im Forgetting-The-Departed-Decades.. Trying To Blockade-With-The-Flow-Of-Passion, Cuz It Will Be Conveying-&-Show-The-Madness People Pissed Cuz Ive Severed The Binding In Which My Prostate-&-Ur-Nose-Are-Fastened.. (Sum People Need'a Get They Heads Outta' My Ass And Out Ma Business..Real Talk) And Thats That.. |
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Fatal
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Where the fuck have you been hiding, mufucka! Anyways, flow was hot throughout and ya syllables were on point. Good shit, nigga. Get active biatch!
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Freeda5thDawg
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not to brag, but i could easily do those type of multies...but see, i write to beats, and doing multis like just over-stretches the lines and just completely fuck up the flow...yes i'm braggin actually...lol, but good to see ur back...vocab was well used, and u said some coolness..good stuff...
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Matt The Ripper
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I don't know what he ^'s talkin' about, but that was pretty dope, dude!
That's the best looking stuff i've personally seen here, thus far!
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Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth |
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teken8996
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MTP^^ stfu do u have any idea how Freda writes??? b4 u talk abt his skill go read his lines... his multi skill is some that is unbelievable... and as far as this verse... its kool i like the multies and its flows good but i just felt the lines were a lil streched... but its a good drop
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Matt The Ripper
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lol... I wasn't dissing him at all, dude... chill.
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Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth |
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GraphicKontent
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Lol.. Not To Brag Either.. But Those Were Simplistic Multies To Me.. Id Could Easily Do 14-16 Syllable Shit. No Problem At All.
And Plus I Know The Lines Were "Stretched". The Thing Is Back At My Site Thats Average Length So I Stick With That.. Short Bar Cuts Down On My Multie Syllable Length And Inner Usage So I Jus Write Like I Do On The Other Site. + One Question At Freeda.. Why Write To A Beat For Text..?.. Kinda Pointless Dawg. Thanks For The Feed @ Everyone. Good Looks. Edited by GraphicKontent - 02 April 2008 at 8:23am |
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Freeda5thDawg
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their all kept for my soon to be audios...i say that cause i have very limited chances of recording...right now at least...but, yup, i see watchur saying...
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Point Blank
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Anything more than 6 syllables fucks up the flow. 14 syllables would just be stretched, with no flow and it would be hard to make it rhyme.
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GraphicKontent
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Actually It Dont
the More Multies The Better The Flow Gets It Jus Depends How Many Filler Words You Put Between The Multies. |
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CHAIN
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+ One Question At Freeda.. Why Write To A Beat For Text..?.. Kinda Pointless Dawg.
^^^^^^are u serious?^^^^^^^
your verse was crazy...artistically, but on some 'rap shit' you could never spit that to a beat, maybe you could do this one, but u can not pack "bars" with 20 syllables, that's ridiculous
i used to do that shit too, have like 12 syllables rhyming and shit...but then guess what, i stepped it up, because it just doesn't flow, and writing to a beat is important, this shit is hip hop, right?? not some poetical spoken word ass shit, right?
you got skills and all that, i'm not trying to diss you at all, but it's very easy to get lost in those overcrowded bars
i'm not a hater, just saying u got talent, just make sure it's put to good use
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GraphicKontent
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And Yall Not Gettin What Im Sayin
If You Have No Intention To Write It To A Beat Why The Fcuk Should Yu Write Tiny Bars?.. And It Doesnt Fuck Up The Flow.. Seriously. All You Have To Do Is Break It Up After Certain Parts And It Would Be Just Another Short Bar Verse. Dont Believe Me? Proof: Now My Temptations-Merking-The-Guys, But I Feel A Sensation-Burning-Inside.. I Must Be Compensated-During-The-Rhymes, I Concentrate-&-Yearn-To-Provide.. Now I Give A Tenacious-Serving-Of-Lines Forming The Most-Musical-Messages.. To All Of Those-Beautiful-Presences Stepping Will Get Yu Thrown-Funeral-Presages.. Degrading-The-Losers, While Manipulating-The-Future.. Taking-Heed-To-Change-Prophecies.. Cuz These Fake-Emcees-Are-Made-Awfully, While I Continue Making-Speech-In-Phraseology.. Dont Get It, Leaving Out The People In The Background Wen The Setting-Is-The-Part-Of-The-Stage.. Im Reminiscing, Getting-In-The-Heart-&-Enraged.. Now Im Forgetting-The-Departed-Decades.. Trying To Blockade-With-The-Flow-Of-Passion, Cuz It Will Be Conveying-&-Show-The-Madness People Pissed Cuz Ive Severed The Binding In Which My Prostate-&-Ur-Nose-Are-Fastened.. Like I Said.. Its The Same Shit In A Different Form.. Edited by GraphicKontent - 02 April 2008 at 5:59pm |
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CHAIN
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now let's see you do the 12+ multi's
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Point Blank
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Graphic, no hate, but that wouldn't flow on a track.
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Swift Styles
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It would if your Krazie Bone..
nice drop GK props on it, even if i cant imagine spittin it when you put it in the second form the text flowed nicely. get more active as fatal said! |
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GraphicKontent
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But @ Point
Who the fuck said i planned on putting it on a track you dudes act like everything you write is going on a track and if it isnt then what the fuck is thepoint of writing short bar?.. Think About It. Fuck. And Thanks For Feed @ The People Who Did. |
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Madeye
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Decent drop... multies was sick.Vocab sick... you know tha' dealz... ONE ['1] |
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<font color=darkgray>I'm only offended by those I respect... and I don't respect you[/COLOR]
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G-Pfeif
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I believe a wise man once said: "they write, with no intention of spittin... That's like eatin a lot and havin no intention of shittin"
your lines are stretched... deal with it... fix it... and stop cryin |
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SageOne
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Amen. And for the record Chain...people write to beats because it's sometimes easier to develop a steady flow when you've got some kicks and snares playing...more heads might do it than you think. |
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CHAIN
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lol ^^^, I thought everybody did, that's why i was shocked
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