Open Mic: Another Lil 4-5 Minute Key.

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.. Couple Creative Punches.. Wordplays.. You Know That Multie Games There Too Ahaha.. Check..

My Message Is Course & Stifled, Punches Agressive To Morph Ya Spinal..!
And Yes, Once I Was Left For Dead But I Chose Directions Towards Survival..!
The Weapon Is More Then Vital, Cuz It Trouble Foes, With Unbearable Fright..
Holding Grudges, Never Bury The Hatchet, Not Even As A Juggalo At His Burial Site..!
Fakest Herbs Get There Verses Wrecked, Bring The Greatest Words With A Certain Bless..!
Battlin Me Has You Digging Your Own Grave Like Funeral Laborers On The Verge Of Death..!
Im Molding The Flame, Controlling The Game, So Stop Doubting That Im Empowered..
Im Just Not Taller Rubble/Tolerable Like Comparing Collapsed Housing To The Twin Towers..!

And Thats How I Do.. Aha

Edited by GraphicKontent - 02 April 2008 at 9:10am

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GraphicKontent Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 13 October 2007 Location: A&D Trailer Park Status: Offline Points: 115 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-1 Form: LWN	Post Options Post Reply Quote GraphicKontent Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Another Lil 4-5 Minute Key. Posted: 02 April 2008 at 9:10am
	.. Couple Creative Punches.. Wordplays.. You Know That Multie Games There Too Ahaha.. Check.. My Message Is Course & Stifled, Punches Agressive To Morph Ya Spinal..! And Yes, Once I Was Left For Dead But I Chose Directions Towards Survival..! The Weapon Is More Then Vital, Cuz It Trouble Foes, With Unbearable Fright.. Holding Grudges, Never Bury The Hatchet, Not Even As A Juggalo At His Burial Site..! Fakest Herbs Get There Verses Wrecked, Bring The Greatest Words With A Certain Bless..! Battlin Me Has You Digging Your Own Grave Like Funeral Laborers On The Verge Of Death..! Im Molding The Flame, Controlling The Game, So Stop Doubting That Im Empowered.. Im Just Not Taller Rubble/Tolerable Like Comparing Collapsed Housing To The Twin Towers..! And Thats How I Do.. Aha Edited by GraphicKontent - 02 April 2008 at 9:10am


GraphicKontent Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 13 October 2007 Location: A&D Trailer Park Status: Offline Points: 115 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-1 Form: LWN	Post Options Post Reply Quote GraphicKontent Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 02 April 2008 at 10:03am
	uppin..


GraphicKontent Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 13 October 2007 Location: A&D Trailer Park Status: Offline Points: 115 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-1 Form: LWN	Post Options Post Reply Quote GraphicKontent Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 02 April 2008 at 11:32am
	UPPING


Freeda5thDawg Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 19 June 2006 Status: Offline Points: 1324 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-1-0 Form: WWWLWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Freeda5thDawg Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 02 April 2008 at 11:51am
	"And Yes, Once I Was Left For Dead But I Chose Directions Towards Survival..!" ^^this line stuck out to me...cause aside from the punches and all, this kinda stuff hits me more...another nice key man...punches were pretty nice, good matchin in scheme...keep at it...


GraphicKontent Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 13 October 2007 Location: A&D Trailer Park Status: Offline Points: 115 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-1 Form: LWN	Post Options Post Reply Quote GraphicKontent Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 02 April 2008 at 1:47pm
	Gud Looks On The Feed Uppin


Madeye Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 25 March 2008 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1177 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-0 Form: WWLLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Madeye Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 02 April 2008 at 5:22pm
	Hmmm... well... you vocab was licked, def. 5/5 [I emphasize this in rhyme also] flow was borderline-Sick, wording tightened this shit up snug... nice. Liked .the red - it's easier on the eyes if it's a fair sized read... wordplay was a lil' unorthadox, but was executed decently. Multies was tight, general consistency and balance were there too, not much to say for the choice of clozer, but creativity was big in this - no doubt. Punches were decent... the first one with "unbearable fright" at its mid-point was kind of lightly-put, but picked it up enough with the punch. 2nd one was nicely "boiled" up and gave a heavier delivery than the first... but definitely fit good for this drop... imo Complexity was more in yur vocab's format. The read of it in general was nice, but didn't really have to make me slow down to continue... ... But I liked this piece some , fa'sho. Overall: 8.8 / 10 * Stay Up, Fam... ONE ['1] Edited by Madeye - 02 April 2008 at 5:27pm
	<font color=darkgray>I'm only offended by those I respect... and I don't respect you[/COLOR]

Fatal Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member ...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Fatal Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 02 April 2008 at 6:17pm
	Yea this was tight. Liked the "verge of death" play the best. Flow was good throughtout...Props. Keep droppin fam... ...1