Open Mic: African History X

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    Posted: 06 August 2008 at 10:54am
......yeah, i know, shut up and keep it movin'
 
 
time for sumthin deeper
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Respect the dark continent, its forests and its desserts, you…
Never knew the truth about Portugal’s professional…
Colonists that conquered it, exported all it’s vegetables
The viciousness of this left orphans with no legs to move
No leadership, no structure, they resorted to electing goons
Adapting to corruption, more for a selected few
Africa’s destruction ain’t morally acceptable
Presidential runners need orders of protection too
Governments are crumbling extorted by the rebel troops
And no we can’t rewind the tape, the messy stuff could stop
But the diamond trade’s important to some western groups
United Nations aren’t really stepping up a lot
Darfur is a quiet storm, we really need to riot more
A silent war is taking place, don’t let ‘em bust the shots!
Traffickers of arms and the States are in cahoots
Investing in the warfare while training all their troops
They ain’t saving Nathan if there’s no profit to be made
From homicides to genocide to adopting all the pain
Of slavery and world wars, no reparations still
Granted independence but they lead ashtray for real
You can’t just rape the land and just throw it back undressed
It’ll prolly shake your hand ‘cause of post traumatic stress
Yes, they love the west, and they’re in hell with HIV
And we won’t help’ em live like there’s no prophylactics left


you copy?


fuck with it

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nice verse chain the message was there and it was delivered well.. some line can be quotable, keep it up.. 
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Point Blank Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 August 2008 at 2:41pm
......yeah, i know, shut up and keep it movin'
 
 
:P...i knew you'd come back haha

Flow was perfect, all the way through...way better than in most of your other pieces so props on that. Rhymescheme was odd at the middle but ended up cool. Loved it
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Nice . . .

. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Kay B Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 August 2008 at 4:02pm
Dope, as point said flow was really nice throughout was real smooth, general content made it a good read...nice drop man nice to see you back

return the favor - http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=15926
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Bolo Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 August 2008 at 10:39pm
this was dope fam...don't worry, ima get at this soon
I am the one that knocks...
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by  far ur best drop imo. shit was sick

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