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SageOne 
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 Topic: Forceful Flows (Dal Collab)Posted: 17 August 2008 at 2:39pm |
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Yessir, The audible return to LA from Sage And Dal.
Put a cap on so your brains dont go everywhere  Enjoy. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=863107&songID=6814948 |
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Posted: 17 August 2008 at 2:47pm |
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Who spat what
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Posted: 17 August 2008 at 2:49pm |
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Ok I realise now...both were good...beat was sick
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Posted: 17 August 2008 at 2:52pm |
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Heard this awhile back and have you my opinion but i'll post it up here to help you out
Dal, i had no complaints about your shit...flow was on, lyrics were dope i was impressed Sage, you had nice verse's only problem i found was that in certain places your flow seemed abit to quick for he beat, lyrics were dope but i felt maybe flowing abit slower may of had a better effect tho u may of needed to flow fast to fit the content in, apart from that it was real nice...beat was dope nice collab |
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Posted: 17 August 2008 at 6:57pm |
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Nice collab... Sage's voice sounds much different from when I first heard him... nice verses... Dal's swag is ill on this... Yall compliment each otha well. Nice lines, like the beat also...
***Edit*** Dal, wtf is up with that beep sound?! Same thing that was on our collab!... Rid it, if possible... Edited by I-kontinue - 18 August 2008 at 11:02am |
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Posted: 17 August 2008 at 8:49pm |
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yo this shit was dope in every way....flow was crazy, lyrics dope and the beat was ill...nice shit...props
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and hypothesis can't define how I be droppin these |
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Posted: 18 August 2008 at 3:20pm |
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this was recorded right after i recorded our track and it was before u pointed it out so that damn smoke detector was still present in my set up
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Posted: 31 August 2008 at 12:36am |
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lmao, I thought my cell phone was dyin' or somethin when I heard that damn beep... lol...
Anyway, this is a tight lil collab. Good aggressive piece. Yea, even you Dal -- much better than the one other recording I heard of yours. all in all, good piece.
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Spent six months hurtin' who I shoulda been supportin'/
But I was nervous, I was stupid, I was pushin' for abortion/ |
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Charlie_B
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Posted: 01 September 2008 at 12:50am |
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Shit was pretty good...
Dal...your flow was great...but your delivery needs a little variety...you sounded like you were being chased. The beat was mellow and slow...and you both were rushing your lyrics. Perhaps...pick a quicker beat next time? Sage...same with you in terms of breathe control...you sounded like you were ignoring the beat at times. Your delivery however was nicer. I think it was just a poor beat selection. Perhaps on a faster beat this would be doper. |
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Posted: 10 September 2008 at 6:35pm |
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feelin this beat already
first guy comes out real nice
very grimey delivery, flow was on point for the most part, kinda rushed some lines here & there but it was cool. content wise this was ok
second guy, the quality doesnt match up, but its aight
got a good flow, content is pretty cool
overall a solid track, i was feelin it
good shit
stay up
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Posted: 10 September 2008 at 9:16pm |
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liked it, sage, ..WTF??? BEEP!....
my B that just fucked my thought up... AHHh yea i remember, Sage, slow down a lil bit, sounds a lil fast for the beat. dal, nicely done on the track exvept for the beep sound like the instrumental and the collab was solid so  |
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